Story finished....

[elfcat255]

Title: Unexpected Appearances da finale
Author: elfcat255
Pairing: Sam/Janet and Alex/Olivia
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: None
Warnings:no beta

Comments

[magicalmongoose]

Aww. That was cute.

I don't think I've read this part before though. Or maybe it's just my inability to remember the ends of stories... Comes in handy when I want to re-read stuff :-P

But anyway. I love the plot you dreamt up for this one, though the actual writing of it could use a bit of polishing. I've noticed several instances where your syntax or grammar doesn't really work.

[elfcat255]

thanks but if I wanted to get the grammer right I would have been an English major instead of a photographer...I write for fun...I don't care about grammer...bleh...I write what comes to me, how it comes to me...and this was written before I had my GF to beta stuff for me...she's the English geek.

[lucydiamond64]

Wow, just found this story and read it all the way through...great job! Loved the interaction between them...you really captured their characters perfectly. Hope you continue writing, you have loads of talent for it!

[elfcat255]

aww..thanks. And yes, I write more...actually I've written lots, feel free to check out my journal..everything has a tag.

[olli01a]

You hit Hathor exactly like I thought of her. All smug and egocentric. The short scene with Elliot and Munch was great too. Most impressive was the idea of Liv as female Bond and Sam as her girl.

Hopefully there will be more stories about the four?

[elfcat255]

hmm..maybe there will be...my muses are on strike right now...grrr...glad you enjoyed this...thanks for the feedback.