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croik

[FIC - Inception] The Helix Trap Chapter 8/19

Jan 06, 2011 22:45

I've canabalized my buffer to post this, because I felt bad about taking a break from it to work on something else. I hope you like it~

Fandom: Inception
Title: The Helix Trap
Chapter: 8/19 (5,960 words) (For other parts please check my My main post.
Rating: R
Pairings/Characters: Eames/Robert, Arthur/Ariadne, Cobb, Yusuf, Saito, Browning, and ( Read more... )

inception, the helix trap, fanfiction

Comments 18

chypie January 7 2011, 06:50:02 UTC

This chapter. Oh, this chapter. <3

I love how they are starting to relate through their own identity crisis issues. And I love how they actually have chemistry and a reason to desperately have at each other, other than just "lol they're both hot". AND, of course, I love how they desperately have at each other, especially with Robert topping. |D

But you know this. <333

croik January 7 2011, 22:27:38 UTC

Thanks bb~~! Glad you like Top!Robert, it is like, the best thing ever. Robert should top everyone, all the time, forever.

0x January 7 2011, 12:15:21 UTC

Delicious!

croik January 7 2011, 22:27:54 UTC

Thanky!

eustacia_vye28 January 8 2011, 03:59:12 UTC

I just ran through the past few chapters that I'd missed. I really like the tension between Robert and Eames, and how they shape each others' dreams that way. One thing bothers me, though... If Arthur had been involved in Robert's dream training, why was it such a surprise in the movie? Arthur would have known about that.

croik January 8 2011, 04:36:50 UTC

Thanks, glad you like it :D

I don't want to spoil it, but the answer to your question will be addressed later in the fic, I promise~

eustacia_vye28 January 8 2011, 04:41:59 UTC

Okay. I will wait patiently then. Because I saw that and went "WHUT?!"

This really heightens the tension, though. Because something went down, and I'm sure it's bad. Just as I'm sure that the current situation will likely end badly for somebody.

hungryspider January 8 2011, 04:09:06 UTC

heydude, I've been following this on ff.net and I absolutely love it ahhh <3<3<3
It is my favorite forever.

Aaanyway I ended up doing some fan art based on this chapter so lol I thought I should let you know. |D

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q206/HungrySpider/IshouldgetsomesleepwhileIsleep.jpg

Can't wait for the next one. <333

croik January 8 2011, 04:42:05 UTC

Oh wow, that's amazing! Thank you so much for sharing it with me. I love it <3333

hungryspider January 13 2011, 05:57:41 UTC

I'MLATE

YOU'RE SO WELCOME! :DD

flynnphle January 8 2011, 08:24:38 UTC

This chapter is ...amazing.
I love how Robert desperately needs Eames which makes the relationship quite convincing rather than sexual appeal. Though I'd been kinda suirprised it was Robert who initiated the kiss and ...everything later on. Is it because of his urgent desperation for reaasurance or simply he is a top? :D (I was just wondering why he looks like a top to me then it turned out he really is. Robert tops Eames, quite impressive. Love it! lol)

I need a Robert icon pfft croik January 9 2011, 04:51:00 UTC

When I write slash I usually don't think too much about tops and bottoms, but for some reason I love Top!Robert (even more than I love Bottom!Eames lol :3). I planned this scene really early when working on the fic, and it made sense in context for Robert to be the initiator, but now I love him as a top in anything. Fandom needs more Roblove!

Thanks for the comment :D