[FIC - Inception] And You Should Have Listened

[croik]

Fandom: Inception
Title: And You Should Have Listened
Words: 2,800
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Inception and its characters aren't mind and I'm using them here for no profit.
Warnings: Major character death (Eames), minor violence
Summary: When Arthur can't cope with Eames' death, he asks Cobb for the impossible.
Notes: I don't normally read character

Comments

[chypie]

:(:(:(:(:(

Well this WAS extremely unhappy; but also, beautifully written. The idea is interesting, and the scene changes paced things well~ Also your icon is very appropriate. It's like a memorial picture.

Oh no, Bone's grave marker. ;A; The poor man OD'd. Oh so sad. And mention of Dr. Banks, too. I really do love how your fics tie in together...! Even if this isn't canon, like you said. Thank goodness for that because, poor, poor Arthur. And Eames. And Cobb.

And the bit about Cobb starting from stepping on the glass. : ( Little touch that made me go, aww, baby.

*clap clap tear* YOU ARE A WONDERFUL CRUEL MISTRESS

[croik]

Boooooooooooooooooone ;o; NGL I felt worse about "killing" him than Eames.

Thanks for the comments! I don't usually write DEATHFIC (*sob*) so I'm glad it came out okay. Now back to heistfic and porn!

[chypie]

WELL YOU PRETTY MUCH SUCCEED AT EVERYTHING YOU WRITE SO

<3 <3 <3

No really, for not writing deathfic often I think you wrote this wonderfully. I like that it was all sort of assumed/felt instead of stating things all explicitly. And sometimes it's so much harder to kill off OCs than it is canon characters; you created him, after all!! GOOD THING THIS ISN'T FIC CANON.

[anonymous]

this is the kind of hurt-so-good fic that I always love reading :(:(:(

[croik]

It hurt to write, tbh! But I'm glad you enjoyed it.