[FIC - Inception] The Helix Trap Chapter 13/19

Feb 10, 2011 17:25

Sorry this chapter is a bit short!

Fandom: Inception
Title: The Helix Trap
Chapter: 13/19 (3,100 words) (For all chapters, art and graphics, please check my My main post)
Rating: R
Pairings/Characters: Eames/Robert, Arthur/Ariadne, Cobb, Yusuf, Saito, Browning, and others.
Warnings: Violence, sexual content.
Disclaimer: These characters and ( Read more... )

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nemly February 11 2011, 03:06:39 UTC
Browning :D Goddamn him for waking him up, but he's so protective.
I thought he was behind all this. ~Fooled...I hope. Browning's cool.

...Did they just assimilate Mr. Charles? Lol, oh no :C I just like the projections so much, all of them. Those with the masks're a little creepy and he doesn't seem to like them all that much, but... One of them is trying to help, at least? Kinda. And the others had Mr. Charles with them, they can't be that bad (in my totally biased opinion). I don't know who to root for D: Robert. I choose Robert. There we go...

Also, GDI, Yusuf. Can't believe I felt sorry for him. But now that he won't let Cobb do whatever he goddamn wants- what trick? And why didn't they wake up? Cliffhanger, no~ ♥

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croik February 11 2011, 04:02:30 UTC
MR. CHARLES IS ASSIMILATE~!!! Yes, poor thing :< But that doesn't mean he's gone. I like him too much <3 There's actually like 3 factions of projections at war in Fischer's mind, which will be pretty much spelled out soon.

Thanks for commenting! I hate to cliffhang but I'm glad you like it :D~

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nemly February 11 2011, 07:00:21 UTC
Three? Haha, owned, I give up. The Boss, indeed... Can't wait ♥

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eustacia_vye28 February 11 2011, 03:23:05 UTC
Oh, wow, hon. This is an amazingly intense chapter. Just when I thought Browning was in on it, everything got inverted.

I hope the team gets out with their minds relatively intact...

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croik February 11 2011, 04:04:11 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad it holds up, despite being the shortest by far.

I guess it depends on who you consider to be on "the team"? to ho ho~

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eustacia_vye28 February 11 2011, 04:05:27 UTC
It's an intense bridging chapter. It still works.

Man, I probably deserve that comment, from all the evil cliffies I put into my own fics. lol. :)

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ruins_of_sodom February 11 2011, 11:29:34 UTC
DDDD: They got Mr. Charles! Oh man, oh man. You just keep building up the pressure, don't you.

Wow, Charla is way older than I originally imagined her to be!

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croik February 11 2011, 23:32:16 UTC
Really? Now I don't remember how I described her originally, but I always meant for her to be pushing sixty. To make the almost Charla/Arthur scene that much creepier XD;;

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gracerevealed February 12 2011, 18:46:56 UTC
I just read this entire brilliant fic in one sitting. All I can say is you've made me a fan of Eames/Robert and thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us!

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croik February 12 2011, 18:57:38 UTC
Whoo, another convert! Love it :3 Thanks for commenting!

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croik February 15 2011, 23:09:12 UTC
Oh god your icon, I am so much love for it *high five*

Thank you! Sorry if I deprived you of sleep XD;; I usually update on Thursday so 14 should be up then~

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