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croik

[FIC - Inception] The Helix Trap Chapter 11/19

Jan 26, 2011 18:33

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Fandom: Inception
Title: The Helix Trap
Chapter: 11/19 (6,330 words) (For other parts please check my My main post)
Rating: R
Pairings/Characters: Eames/Robert, Arthur/Ariadne, Cobb, Yusuf, Saito, Browning, and others.
Warnings: Violence, sexual content.
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Comments 11

carolpent January 27 2011, 01:12:42 UTC

Eee! I can't wait to see what happens next!

croik January 27 2011, 11:39:33 UTC

Me too! *ahem* I mean, everything's totally under control! lol :D;;;

chypie January 27 2011, 08:18:34 UTC

Shit's gettin' craaaaazy~ Reading this again was nice for extra clarification. :3 Charla you magnificent beeotch.

...was this really originally Arthur/Robert? Haha~

croik January 27 2011, 11:43:36 UTC

You mean you couldn't tell? *lol* But yeah, originally I wanted to try Arthur/Robert (because for some reason I like those "not-only-rare-but-never-really-met-in-canon" pairs) but once I started planning out the effects of the Inception on Robert I realized Eames just made much more sense from a plot perspective. And the more I plotted, the more I fell in OTP love with them <3

eustacia_vye28 January 28 2011, 02:37:04 UTC

OOH! This is so mind bendingly twisty. I love it!

I can't wait to see what happens. Even with the explanation that Charla was whipping Arthur through the dreaming, it still came out all eye-crossing confusing at first. Great job!

croik January 28 2011, 03:12:05 UTC

Thanks! :D

Sorry if it was too confusing XD;;; Maybe I'm trying too hard to be Nolanesque? SIMPLE IS BAD, ha ha ha. Next chapter should be a bit more straightforward. Probably. I think.

Thanks for commenting!

eustacia_vye28 January 28 2011, 03:15:08 UTC

nononononono! That's not a bad thing! I think I just read it too fast the first time around. I had to reread the section a little more slowly, is all. I get excited with new fic and read quickly. lol.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

nemly January 28 2011, 04:58:02 UTC

I really like Robert here at the end, that he refused to kill himself and just shoved him at his projections. That moment of hilarity earlier's a little creepy, though. Don't lose it, bb lol. ~still dreaming. Oh hey, it's the General :D And a fake Maurice (shhh I love him okay?).

Crazy chapter ♥

croik January 29 2011, 01:53:30 UTC

Haha, thanks! Poor Robert's had such a hard day, he needed a chance to fight back. Eames would be so proud <3

icrackthecodes January 29 2011, 22:08:07 UTC

I realised I've been really, really shockingly bad at keeping up with this fic, which is a crying shame because it's seriously one of the best things I'm reading right now. Honestly. There's just not enough Robert-centric fic as it is, and this is such an interesting and well-thought-out and brilliantly executed take on things.

Robert's projections are scaring the hell out of me, too. And all the pinwheels, ungh. I hope someone makes art for this at some point, because it would be epic!

croik January 29 2011, 23:50:52 UTC

Oh my, your icon, much love <333

Thank you so much! I know it's not the easiest fic to keep track of, in content and length, but I'm glad you're enjoying it.

And I agree, we need more Robert fic in this fandom, stat. There are so many possibilities with his character, and I've had so much fun exploring them, I keep hoping that more people will jump on board the Robert-Train. If can get ahead enough of Helix maybe I'll sneak some time in to do some porn, that might help, ha ha ha.