Vertigo (for darkyulate)

Sep 29, 2015 12:06

For: darkyulate
From: lulai

Title: Vertigo
Rating: PG-13
Length: 5000 words
Summary: Junmyeon is happy when he finds a friend amongst the nobility, but he has to weigh the consequences when he finds out he actually has to marry him

Notes: hello! I’m sorry this is a bit shorter than I would have liked, but I enjoyed your prompts so I hope you enjoy this as ( Read more... )

critcap: round3, * submissions, rating: pg-13

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darkyulate September 29 2015, 04:13:52 UTC
SPOT SPOT SPOT I AM THIS IS MINE THANK YOU BRB

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darkyulate September 30 2015, 12:48:02 UTC
OH GOSH IM SO SORRY I TOOK SO LONG TO COMMENT >< I had to wait until I got on a computer so I could properly quote the things I liked and it took me a bit of time >< ANYWAY MOVING ON

I'M sO GLAD WITH WHAT YOU DID WITH MY PROMPT? I love how formal and sophisticated you made it to be BUT ALSO AT THE TIME SAME TIME, not olden times? that was a good balance and it made Joonmyun and Jongdae really feel like nobility and I was just so awed.

Junmyeon tries to imagine Kyungsoo married to the Marquis and it easily flows into a daydream of false condolences of Marquis Kang’s unfortunate accident and Junmyeon rather wants to congratulate Kang on continuing to live instead.
I LOVE EVIL KYUNGSOO EVEN IF IMPLIED? BECAUSE THIS CHARACTERISTIC IS DEFINITELY NOT FAR FROM THE TRUTH hahaha although I do wonder who Marquis Kang is. I literally tried to think of all the idols I know with the last name Kang and ended up with Kangin until... I realized that wasn't his last name hahaha

‘First for heirs, second for spares, third for arranging family ( ... )

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soft_wallnuts September 30 2015, 00:44:40 UTC
Nobility AU?! Lovin' it even before I've started reading. ^^

Junmyeon tries to imagine Kyungsoo married to the Marquis and it easily flows into a daydream of false condolences of Marquis Kang’s unfortunate accident and Junmyeon rather wants to congratulate Kang on continuing to live instead.
Do Kyungsoo - cute but deadly.

Vicount Oh had to scramble to when his son’s yacht got stolen by the strippers he had hired to surprise his best friend and got stranded several hundred miles out to sea and had to be rescued
Hahahaha, Sehun. :D

‘The second son of the Marquis of Daejeon.’
PLEASE BE WHO I THINK YOU ARE.

‘Economy is bad these days.’
I chuckled at this. ^^

Ahhhh, I was so happy when Junmyeon's arranged husband turned out to be Jongdae. And their progress from friends to husbands to lovers was wonderful - yay for Junmyeon finally confessing! ^^ This was a great read, thank you!

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zyxisagod September 30 2015, 06:20:31 UTC
gosh I love this SO MUCH hng the fusion of european nobility of the past and modern South Korean chaebol lifestyle :3 :3

the progression of their relationship is so ENDEARING and kyungsoo is SO right about jongdae. jd wins everything. he reads jm so well and is so patient and considerate of him that I couldn't help but fall in love with him too haha

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xxhna October 2 2015, 23:25:57 UTC
omg i LOVE IT?

jongdae is the best lbr.

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ext_2180629 October 3 2015, 19:33:39 UTC
I just wanna say that i love this! Though they were arranged married, the flow of their relationship's progress is awesome!!!! Jongdae is so wise and Jun is so oblivious! I evn think Jongdae knew and made the way to marry Jun.. hehehe.. i wish there was smut though.. when jun finally confessed.. 'can we have sex now?' 'Of course'.. love it!! Good job, authornim!!!

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