Open Your Eyes Chapter Nine

[cristofle]

Title: Open Your Eyes (9/?)
Author: Cristofle (Liz)
Characters: Harry/Hermione primarily. Harry, Hermione, and Ron will appear significantly, but this is ensemble friendly, including just about everyone. The Weasley family, Kingsley, Angelina Johnson, Teddy Lupin, Neville, Luna, the Patil twins, and Dean will definitely appear in more than passing

Comments

[jjm_7]

Kreacher was convinced Harry only really liked his cooking; Harry let it stay that way.

Awwww. Hee. *keeps reading*

[cristofle]

LMAOOOOOOO at that icon. Everyone got smacked around in this movie. I think my favorite is Sirius randomly punching Lucius, though. Fuck the wand- Sirius is OLD SCHOOL! Making since, since movie Sirius is clearly a mere two years younger than Dumbledore (ily Gary).

[jjm_7]

Hee, I love my icon. Look at Hermione in the background. LMAO.

[cristofle]

LMAO! *pets Hermione*

[erica_85]

NON merci.

[cristofle]

:P

[jjm_7]

Okay, so that was pretty cool. Even though it wasn't a 100% romantic chapter, it was still really interesting. And HHr continue to get closer and their feelings keep getting stronger. They had EYE!SEX! again! And Harry is confused, and it's starting to consider being in a relationship with her. That's progress, I'd say. And, most importantly, things are not awkward between them, which is great, cause it helps them keep working on the case.

I randomly loved this line:
“I think I’ve wondered periodically since I was eleven years old how you got so smart.” Aww. Why are you so sweet, Harry

[jjm_7]

Pretty sure I made a ton of grammar mistakes in my review. But that's because I was too excited. So it's your fault, Liz.

[cristofle]

LMAO. Ooops.

Yeah, like I said, it's a little abstract, because it's more of a set up for the next chapter (yeah, I'm being mean, lol). But I wanted both for Harry to reveal the secrets of the Penseive since they upset him so much in the past and I don't think he ever told anyone, and to see a glimpse into Hermione's life and how it got to be so lonely outside of Harry. And the case thing needed to be set up as well. And Harry, who's newer to awareness of the feelings if not newer to the feelings themselves, needs his own reflection.

I totally see Harry and Hermione as the types to each insist the other should have the job- they have that kind of respect for each other.

[melissa_35]

Jacky already said everything I was going to say, so she's the reason I'm lazy. Fucking loved it though. I NEED ANOTHER CHAPTER MORE THAN I NEED COFFEE IN THE MORNING.

[cristofle]

LMAO. Icon love.

It should be up not tooooooooo far from now. Tomorrow might be pushing it, but the next night?

[chandlerbingfan]

Don't have much time to comment, but it's just like Jacky said! Awesome!

LOL. And I agree with what Mel said too! MORE!

[cristofle]

JEN!:)