Open Your Eyes: Chapter Seven

[cristofle]

Title: Open Your Eyes (7/?)
Author: Cristofle (Liz)
Characters: Harry/Hermione primarily. Harry, Hermione, and Ron will appear significantly, but this is ensemble friendly, including just about everyone. The Weasley family, Kingsley, Angelina Johnson, Teddy Lupin, Neville, Luna, the Patil twins, and Dean will definitely appear in more than passing

Comments

[jjm_7]

Liz, that was amazing! I loved the dinner with the Weasleys. I LOVE GEORGE. Even though he misses his brother :( he's still HILARIOUS. You write him so well! And Bill/Fleur are having a BABY! Awwww. I think the way Harry acted around Ginny was completely in character. Same with Hermione being totally okay about R/D.

And what can I say about Harry and Hermione? Their hug was PRECIOUS. *dies* They're so cute, I'm glad George was the one to notice something going on there.

“Are you asking me out on a date?” Harry asked wryly, even as his curiosity peaked a little at the offer.

George clapped his hands together and batted his lashes in an exaggerated fashion. “Please? Please please please?”LMAOOOOO. I really enjoyed Harry/George interaction

[cristofle]

Probably soon; I have more of the next chapter specifically mapped out in my mind than I sometimes do, including a part I'd virtually written word for word in my head prior to even starting the fic.

Someone had to notice it on Harry's end, as Hermione has Angelina- I decided George was the best choice, the Weasley child who likely knows him best after Ron, who HE knows best after Ron (I do not count Ginny, she was insignificant for five books! LOL).

[melissa_35]

I was actually planning on writing a long comment...but then Jacky basically said exactly what I was going to say, lol. Anyway, HHr are so adorable. I love that she always goes to Harry's place, and that they're so comfortable with each other. George is awesomeness because he's George, and also because he knows Harry/Hermione belong together. Hee. And they do NEED TO DANCE. HAVE THEM DANCE! They also should have sex, but not for awhile, lol.

[cristofle]

LMAOOO. Yeah, that's gonna come after dancing. Aaaaaaaaaaaafter dancing. Wayyyyyyyyy.

[melissa_35]

As long as sex will happen eventually. ;)

[jjm_7]

Mel is going to write HHr sex for my birthday cause she loves me and she is awesome.

[cristofle]

LMAO. It will come in good time.

[misplacedmoony]

I was not expecting a new chapter and I'm so happy I checked this before I went to bed. Harry and Hermione are very in character, especially Hermione with the whole Ron fiasco. I also like that you're not slapping us in the face with Hermione being madly in love with Harry, just that she's falling for him, because let's face it, he's awesome. At least, your Harry is. And George is also so great. I knew there was a reason he was my favourite twin (although I do miss Fred so very much). And this mystery is heating up, isn't it? It's a good balance between the mystery and the romance. I'm very intrigued.

[cristofle]

I miss Fred too:( But I also wish Jo had done some more exploring of the devastating effects the deaths of Lupin and Fred in particular, whom the trio were so close to. And instead I'm left to do it myself, lol.

Thanks a lot!:)

[bigdreams1111]

Yes, I'm aware how odd this looks. However, before you think the world is ending, I did not read this. I actually went to look at your Lily/James update, and happened to see this in your 'characters' for this fic: "Dean will definitely appear in more than passing appearances."
And I just needed to say that I effing LOVE Dean,and him being in one of your fics would normally be more than enough reason for me to read it. Unfortunately, in this particular situation, it's still not enough, but still, I'm glad that you're exploring his character, because he is AWESOME and I'm in love with him. Okay, that's all. I still love you (and Dean), even though I didn't read the actual fic.

[cristofle]

LMAO. I like Dean a lot, too. Especially the adorable actor who plays him.