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cristofle

Just a Blacksmith

Jul 08, 2006 09:38

Just a Blacksmith

My very first "published" non OC fic. Spoilers for Pirates of the Caribbean: Dead Man's Chest. Towards the end of the movie, Will reflects on his fate.( Read more... )

will and elizabeth, pirates of the caribbean, fanfic

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dishyfishy July 8 2006, 16:16:43 UTC

You forgot to add "And then Will and Liz lived happily ever after and everyone who thought she'd be with Jack was WRONG and Ally was RIGHT because Will and Liz are LOVE."

...But other than that, it was awesome, lol! SO Will. Just...perfectly.

But the part of him that had exploded to life the instant his lips first touched hers was forever lost.

That was so sad :( But so true, again, for Will.

...But you really should write a fic where they live happily ever after :)

cristofle July 8 2006, 16:38:50 UTC

LOL! The Elizabeth companion piece is going to be more W/E friendly. Will doesn't know she sacrificed Jack to essentially save him, but she does.

dishyfishy July 8 2006, 16:40:19 UTC

LOL! Oh good!

cristofle July 8 2006, 16:44:23 UTC

You and me, Ally. *pounds chest* Will all the way!

onewonderfulday July 8 2006, 17:12:37 UTC

I'll always love my W/E.. So cute in the first POTC

"I'd die for her" *swoons*

onewonderfulday July 8 2006, 17:14:15 UTC

Sooooo cute, but sad.. Aww poor Will. I can't wait to read the compainion peice.. It was amazing how you showed how he'd kind of suck it up and smile and forgive her

"He was just a blacksmith after all."

*drowns in a puddle of tears*

bigdreams1111 July 8 2006, 18:52:37 UTC

Awwww. This was so sweet and sad and well written.

I'm not used to not agreeing with you on things. It's a weird feeling, lol.

cristofle July 8 2006, 18:56:19 UTC

LMAO. Let's talk about Marissa. And Ryan. And how everything in the world is Ryan's fault. We need to get back on even footing, lol.

bigdreams1111 July 8 2006, 19:28:46 UTC

Okay! Yay!
Telling her that she drags him and everyone around him down was the stupidest shit I've ever heard in my life, until he said that she was the same type of girl as Jess. Stupid fucker.

Everytime I scratch my nails down someone elses back I hope you feeeeel it!

cristofle July 8 2006, 19:35:59 UTC

That is THE thing to watch if you're pissed off at Ryan if I do say so myself.

Comparing her to Jess. *throws shit out the window*

onewonderfulday July 8 2006, 21:01:06 UTC

That scene makes me cry. He regrets what he said. Poor Marissa *cries*