Fanfic: Change

[cristaliano]

Title: Change
Rating: G
Pairing: A/O of course
Disclaimer: Dont own them, but I love them ^^

Holy cow, I cant believe I wrote an A/O fic! So since this certainly is my first attempt in writing A/O (I've got to warned you thou' English is not my 1st language and my grammar suck big time ^^), So... please be gentle! All comments are welcome ^^ Thanx!  

Comments

[cirroco_desade]

Very interesting first attempt. I liked the ideas, the descriptions and the dialogue. It would help if you got a beta, especially since you say English is not your first language. You tended to drift back and forth in the tenses, which distracted from an otherwise lovely fic. I hope you continue to write.

[cristaliano]

Thank you ^^

next time I'll threat my friend to be my beta, LoL

[geekgrrllurking]

Hey, great first fic! I liked the banter between them at the end. Very sweet. I hope you keep writing!

[cristaliano]

Thanks! I'll try ^^

[cassidyss]

Nice ficlet. You captured a moment that might have been well. Keep trying. I myself am trying to get up the courage to write another fic myself. Seeing another new writer attempting the same may motivate me more. XD

[cristaliano]

Thank you!

I definitely encourage you to write and would love to read your fic, we need more AO goodness out there ^^