Comments | crisper: 100 Words: PKD, Freelance Detective

crisper

Aug 02, 2005 17:54

“So this… android… You think it killed one of your employees and has taken their place ( Read more... )

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spasmsproject August 3 2005, 04:39:47 UTC

Very nice! Is it exactly 100 words? If the 100 is more of a guideline than a rule, I'd drop "Then" from the last sentence. Otherwise, yay!

crisper August 3 2005, 04:46:02 UTC

Exactly 100 words as counted by MS Word.

packbat August 4 2005, 12:45:05 UTC

Brilliant! Brilliant, I say!

P.S. Was this really inspired by "(I Can't Get No) Satisfaction"?

crisper August 4 2005, 14:28:31 UTC

Yep. Though, to be completely accurate, I was actually listening to the Devo version of the song.