silent interlude

Jan 20, 2012 10:29

I hear him before I see him. The creak of his chain comes up from behind me as we both near the crest of the Longfellow Bridge, and then he passes and I make the match. His face is masked and his eyes are shaded by sunglasses, but I recognize the posture, the bike and the legs -- bare even in the middle of winter, carved like marble and gleaming ( Read more... )

cycling, bikes

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silentq January 20 2012, 15:49:42 UTC
:)
I have one guy that I'll see for a bit near my new place, but I don't have any regulars yet. Probably doesn't help that most of the bikers are pretty fast and I'm in no rush to get to work. :)

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cris January 20 2012, 15:55:16 UTC
yeah, it probably helps me that most of my new commute is still the same as half of my old commute.

btw, this entry is a day late. Today's commute was all about the slow and steady. No way would I be pulling stuff like that with roads as slushy as they are now.

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sirendipity January 20 2012, 18:44:27 UTC
This is one of those posts that makes me smile all the way through.

You would love to see your stories published one day.

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ayun January 20 2012, 20:01:48 UTC
This is downright pornographic.

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cris January 20 2012, 21:12:47 UTC
wait ... really?

hmm, I might be in a mood.

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ayun January 20 2012, 21:33:29 UTC
Yeah, really. I mean, it more or less begins with you admiring another guy's unclothed body part and is very rooted in the physical. A lot of phrases that lend themselves well to innuendo (slipping in behind, etc.) Seriously, it reads to me like the first act of an anonymous hook-up story. A good one! Nothing tacky!

(I have, to be fair, been hanging out a lot at work lately with a gay guy who doesn't overshare exactly, but is as out as out can be.)

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cris January 20 2012, 22:48:53 UTC
and I have, to be fair, been hanging out with a bunch of people who have made a fine art of innuendo and can even make 'hanging out' sound dirty FOR 15+ YEARS.

(though, yeah, on re-read: "carved like marble ... backside ... balls out". I have been in a mood)

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panzerkunst January 21 2012, 02:33:33 UTC
That was vivid.

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