Haunted - Epilogue

May 15, 2012 13:39

Title: Haunted
Author: phoenix_zeal
Pairing: Akame, HayaRyu
Rating: R
Genre: Angst, Romance, Ghost Story
Disclaimer: I do not make any profit from this.
Beta: Myself
Summary: It had been a couple of years since Jin and Kazuya met. The mansion was no longer haunted and their relationship seemed strong. Then they got an opportunity to live in a Scottish castle ( Read more... )

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romapi May 15 2012, 14:28:40 UTC
lol im really late in reading this. there so many comment now. (pout) why do i think it not yet finish or there something locking about it. lol

thanks for sharing.

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phoenix_zeal May 15 2012, 14:30:36 UTC
It hasn't been that long since I posted it, though. I don't know, maybe it's just my habit of leaving my endings a bit open. They're together again, though, and that's the point I wanted to reach.

Thank you!

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romapi May 15 2012, 14:38:01 UTC
lol that means it have a sequel again. Puppy eyes.

I hope you will write again akame fic but if you want to write other that will be fine too.

what pairing are you interested to write?

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phoenix_zeal May 15 2012, 14:43:50 UTC
No way, this will definitely not have a sequel, lol. It would only be them doing mundane couple things anyway.

I write a bit of Sherlock/John from the British series Sherlock and I also want to write Merlin/Arthur from the series Merlin. :) Other than that I write original fiction.

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krystal_32206 May 15 2012, 14:37:08 UTC
It's nice how you wrote the epilogue. Not too 'and they got back together again' kind of way..more like subtly hinting that they're going to rekindle their relationship and work on it. ^^

Thanks for sharing this fic. It was scary and fun to read.XD
Though I'm a bit sad that your Akame muses are fading, I'm still looking forward to your future fics, albeit with a different pairing. ^^

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phoenix_zeal May 15 2012, 14:46:24 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you think that it was a nice way to end it. I know that sort of open endings aren't to everyone's taste but I enjoy writing them, lol. I thought it was pretty clear that they're going to get back together. :)

Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D
I just hope I'll actually have time to write more fanfics. My plots are just becoming longer and more complicated so it's difficult to find time for them. XD

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dream_air May 15 2012, 14:46:32 UTC
It sounds like their is going to be more!!!! Why oh why!!!!! Does it feel and sound like that!!!!!

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phoenix_zeal May 15 2012, 14:49:29 UTC
No, sorry, there definitely won't be more. I just have a tendency to write sort of open but hopeful endings. It's like the start of something new but it's the ending, if that makes sense. XD

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dream_air May 15 2012, 14:55:07 UTC
So you really like to leave things open. It was good, but it make me want more, yet as you said, it is the end. *Hugs and cry* Such a good story though.

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phoenix_zeal May 15 2012, 14:57:35 UTC
Maybe because I personally like when others leave a happy but open end so I can imagine what happens next. They become a couple again, they work through their problems and one day in a not so distant future, people will accept gay people even more so Jin can be open with their relationship. ;P Thank you!

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lovekame02 May 15 2012, 15:15:52 UTC
Uwaaaaah how did I miss this?! :|
Okie I will read all the previous chaps (and this one) and will be back with a proper comment.

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phoenix_zeal May 15 2012, 15:19:00 UTC
I don't know but I think quite a lot of people post their fics during my usual posting time on Fridays so it might have got lost in a sea of other fics. XD

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lovekame02 May 17 2012, 19:39:03 UTC
Hmmm I think I might have seen it but with my usual memory loss I forgot that I wanted to read it :|
Okie I'm done reading all of it and I really love it!
And I loved the way you wrote the epilogue, an opening ending letting it to everyone's imagination (does this make sense?)
I feel sad thinking this is probably your last time writing Akame and I perfectly respect your decision. Besides everything good comes to an end at some point of life right?
I do hope though you won't disappear from here and you will come back from time to time to let us know how you are ne?
Wish you all the best in whatever you are going to do in your future.
♥♥♥♥

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phoenix_zeal May 17 2012, 19:47:28 UTC
I know that feeling. I quite frequently have annoying memory losses. XD
Thank you! Yes, that makes perfect sense. I seem to always tend to leave my endings at least somewhat open. Maybe I simply don't know how to give everything closure, lol. But I can't give closure when their relationship is just starting over and that's why the ending has to be open because it's actually a new beginning? I don't know what I'm talking about, ignore me.
As much as I wish that I could just spend my entire life writing every Akame plot bunny I've ever had, I think this is the right time to stop. As you said, everything comes to an end at some point.
I won't disappear, you guys aren't going to get rid of me that easily. XD I'm probably going to post a few fics that aren't Akame so you'll know that I'm alive at least.
Thank you very much!
♥♥♥♥

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kaze_no_hisui May 15 2012, 15:21:04 UTC
love the ending although there is no some fluff moments but still feel good ^^v at least they now confirm their feeling for the other are real, especially jin and kazuya can prove something to his family \^o^/

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phoenix_zeal May 15 2012, 15:24:05 UTC
Thank you! I'm afraid I'm not an overwhelmingly fluffy person so fluff moments from me are kind of rare. XD I'm glad that you still liked it, though.

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