Haunted - Chapter 5

[phoenix_zeal]

Title: Haunted
Author: phoenix_zeal
Pairing: Akame, HayaRyu
Rating: R
Genre: Angst, Romance, Ghost Story
Disclaimer: I do not make any profit from this.
Beta: Myself
Summary: It had been a couple of years since Jin and Kazuya met. The mansion was no longer haunted and their relationship seemed strong. Then they got an opportunity to live in a Scottish castle

Comments

[drugslovepain_9]

Really good! I cant wait for the next update! I will patiently wait for it!! Thanks for sharing!

[phoenix_zeal]

Thank you very much!

[mizuirohime]

*u* akame team helping lost souls ~
hahaha. Thanks for thiiss <3 will wait for the next one :3

[phoenix_zeal]

Mostly Kame helping them and Jin just being nearby, haha.
Thank you!

[krystal_32206]

At first I was scared because I'm reading this at night.. Ghost kids still creep me out..
But it's actually quite good that Kazu and Jin helped two lost souls to move on.
And the part where Jin hugged Emma was sweet and sad.
I'm actually glad that you made Eliza the last ghost that Kazu and Jin will face. Because even though she didn't kill Emma, I'm still scared of her based on what she'd done when she was alive. XD
Thanks for the update!

[phoenix_zeal]

Ghost kids still creep me out too but Emma and Eliza aren't that bad in the end... probably. XD
Of course I'll save Eliza for last, she's the scariest presence, lol. She just didn't understand why what she did was wrong, though, so she really isn't evil or anything. I guess that isn't much comfort. :P
Thanks for the comment!

[dream_air]

OHHH I can't wait for the next chapter!!! I love this one!!!

[phoenix_zeal]

Thank you! :)

[pinkporca]

Very well done. Interesting to read about how they died etc. Jin is slowly getting used to the ghosts. So sweet how he held Emma. Thanks for the update.

[phoenix_zeal]

Thank you very much! Well, Jin will always have a soft spot for kids, whether they're alive or not. XD