Haunted - Chapter 4

[phoenix_zeal]

Title: Haunted
Author: phoenix_zeal
Pairing: Akame, HayaRyu
Rating: R
Genre: Angst, Romance, Ghost Story
Disclaimer: I do not make any profit from this.
Beta: Myself
Summary: It had been a couple of years since Jin and Kazuya met. The mansion was no longer haunted and their relationship seemed strong. Then they got an opportunity to live in a Scottish castle

Comments

[drugslovepain_9]

heya there~

Great chappie!!! Kame and Jin's relationship seem kinda rocky :O I hope it gets better...

Anyways cant wait for your next update!! *hugs*

[phoenix_zeal]

Hey~ :D

Thank you! Oh, we'll see about that. XD I intentionally intended for this to be really fluffy but then suddenly Jin and Kame decided to be all snarky towards each other and really introspective and hesitant. I have no idea how that happened. I guess it just shows how much I've changed since I wrote Reflections?

I'll try posting it earlier rather than later next week but I can't promise anything. *hugs*

[drugslovepain_9]

You're welcome~ Fluff is good but I lean towards more of the drama in stories and angst but that is just me! I loved Reflections a lot but I am starting to like this more and more...now that I looked back your writing content did change but I like it!! :)

I will patiently wait for the next update.Don't worry!!

[phoenix_zeal]

I admit that I prefer reading fluffier things, at least I don't want to read super dramatic fics, but I prefer writing things that are a bit darker. When I read it's to become happy, when I write it's to explore subjects I'd otherwise avoid. If that makes sense.

Thank you! :)

[krystal_32206]

This is getting scarier and weirder..but in a good way! :)
Eliza was mentally ill wasn't she? That's why she was kept locked in her room?
But what really happened to them? Why do Eliza and Emma haunt the castle?

Guess I'll just have to wait for the next chapters then. Thanks for this! :)

[phoenix_zeal]

Good that it's in a good way! :D
You'll get the answers pretty soon, I believe.

Thank you! :)

[pinkporca]

Great chapter. This one is a little scarier. The relationshiop between Jin and Kazuya is getting a little broken. Hope that the ghosts leave them in peace. Also, it is weird reading about ghosts taking over Kazuya's body like that..Spooky. Thanks for the update.

[phoenix_zeal]

Thank you! The ghosts aren't really taking control over Kazuya's body, at least not in his dreams. It's more like he enters the ghost's thoughts and emotions to see in which way he can help them. He doesn't always do it on purpose but he isn't really violated either. It would be different if they tried to possess him while he's awake and they want to use his body for their own purpose. So far that hasn't happened to him. :)

[kazu_chan_love]

i love this fic...i love horror movies but i think this is the first fic i read with ghost...love how you wrote this...

i wonder what really happenned...
what was eliza's illness?...

we'll wait for the next one...
thanks for sharing this♥♥♥

[phoenix_zeal]

Thank you! I'm not a horror movie fan but I do love reading ghost stories.

You'll have to wait and see~

Thank you for reading! ♥

[mae0513]

Omg!!

Love this chapty:)

Me want more!

Thanks for the update and sharing~

[phoenix_zeal]

Thank you very much! :D