Kiba - Chapter 2

[phoenix_zeal]

Title: Kiba
Author: phoenix_zeal
Pairings: Akame, JinDa
Rating: R
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Angst
Disclaimer: If I owned them I'd be too busy to write...
Beta: death_note13 ♥
Summary: Jin had always been different from the other people in the small town but he had no idea why. Struggling with feeling unloved and strange, he only had his childhood friend Kazuya. One night

Comments

[yumenokoe]

they are... butchers? O.o I would neverhave imagined Jin like that x)
I kinda like kazuya here :)
Jin concentrating on Kame's smell not to smell the blood was cute! :)
But tatsuya scares me! >.< why does he want Jin to come down into the basement? He won't do anything to him nee? *worried*
Can't wait to know what Kiba really are! :)
thanks for sharing!

[phoenix_zeal]

I write strange stuff at times and butcher seemed like the best thing to go with. XD It's very convenient.
If Tatsuya wanted to do something really bad to Jin he'd have done it already so don't worry. X3
Thank you!

[kerua]

The plot is original,I like it~
I wonder how both of the relationships are going to evolve from here,both Akame and JinDa. Who is Jin going to end up with~~ Kame,I hope XD

I feel a bit sorry for Kazuya...Seems like he cares so much for Jin but communication is definitely lacking between the two of them...

Will wait for the next chapter <3

[phoenix_zeal]

Thank you!
I only have a very vague idea about where this fic is going so I really couldn't tell you. XD

Torturing Kazuya in fics seems to be one of my favourite things to do in my free time... One of these days I'm going to let him be happy through an entire fic. XD Or at least a one-shot.

[akameangel]

About kiba is still in question.. Thank for your fast update!!! First I assumed Kazuya may be Kiba. Now that ... Does Jin will turn to Kiba because of Ueda ? Many question in my head.. Pla update soon.Can't wait ..:(

[phoenix_zeal]

Everything will become much clearer in the next chapter I hope.
I'll try to update soon. :)

[rim1789]

That was really interesting. I wondered if Tat-chan was a vampire or not and it's a good think your said no ^^ I Really like your Kazuya ^^ He seems a very interesting character and I really like him :D I also feel sorry for him...Thanks for the update^^

[phoenix_zeal]

Thank you! I just wanted to do something different than the run of the mill vampire fic. Vampires are so overexposed in the media right now and so much of it is crap. *sighs*

[little1233]

i like it, its interesting
looking forward to da next chap

[phoenix_zeal]

Thank you!