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Bring Me to Life - Chapter 8

Dec 13, 2009 01:30

Title: Bring Me to Life
Author: phoenix_zeal
Pairings: Akame
Rating: R
Genre: Romance, Angst, Horror
Disclaimer: If I owned them I'd be too busy to write...
Beta: death_note13 ♥
Summary: The whole world is overrun by monsters that Kazuya never thought would ever be real. Now Kazuya is struggling to survive on his own until one night when he meets Jin who is more special ( Read more... )

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diisa_pinky December 13 2009, 02:56:47 UTC

it's creepy to find out that freak scientist watching them everyday and what are they doing... (i don't want those scientist watches them have sex too!!)
anyway~~~ thanks for sharing and updating :D
meisa is a nice girl, she should be the one who warn them about this problem... :)

phoenix_zeal December 13 2009, 02:58:27 UTC

Thank you!

bellemainec December 13 2009, 04:48:12 UTC

filler chapter? Filler chapter is full of akame goodness, so I am happy :) Meisa sounds like she is sorry for having made the wrong choice, so I am hopeful that she may get a chance to atone at some point. Nice to hear what is happening in the rest of the world (well not nice in the sense that it appears a world war is going on but you know what I mean), and I personally think that the more time akame spend in front of that fireplace the better :)

phoenix_zeal December 13 2009, 14:58:04 UTC

Meisa didn't even know what kind of experiments would be made so I feel really sorry for the poor thing. :( She just wanted a deskjob so she could be with her boyfriend instead of being out in the world, fighting in the war. *pats her*
Haha, they have to get moving again though and I can only keep things interesting for a short while unless I'd describe the smut or something and man, I don't want to do that. XD
Thank you!

garnet_light December 13 2009, 05:48:07 UTC

It sure is creepy.
Poor Kazu will have a heartattack after knowing that they have been watched.
I enjoyed reading this chapter a lot
Can't wait for the next update!!

Thanks a lot for this great update! I loved it!
Chuuuuuu~

phoenix_zeal December 13 2009, 14:55:25 UTC

But will he ever know? *creepy grin*
Thank you!

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phoenix_zeal December 13 2009, 14:54:42 UTC

LOL! Somehow I totally doubt that... especially since I'm the writer of this fic and know all the real reasons. XD

Haha, it's really just another one of my lame innuendos but it fits Jin. :3

Thank you!

shi_koi December 13 2009, 08:38:56 UTC

*heart*

Filler or not, this is still a brilliant chapter. --laughs-- I don't think you can write anything boring ( ... )

phoenix_zeal December 13 2009, 14:52:56 UTC

Haha, thank you! I am pretty damn sure that I can write boring stuff though. One word: NaNoWriMo

Since I have terrible trouble with remembering any names at all, I had to google Kenta and now I know who he is of course. Uh, your thoughts are kind of disturbing me now. D: Keep in mind that I am still fairly innocent! XD Yeah right.Aww, it's okay. Sometimes I get carried away while talking about my writing and then one hour later I notice that everyone I'm talking to are totally bored and don't get it at all. I hope it didn't bore you though. XD ( ... )

shi_koi December 13 2009, 15:12:46 UTC

*heart*

NaNo? --bursts into tears-- Ohhh~ yes, we know all about NaNo.--laughs-- I'm actually pretty terrible with names, It took me a few minutes of hard thinking and even then I was on the verge of googling Meisa when it clicked, you know, about how that name was familiar ( ... )

phoenix_zeal December 13 2009, 15:23:53 UTC

It was torture, all I wanted to do was toss my book aside and write this instead.

I disliked Kenta's character so much in OPG that I was like "get that dude away from me!" and had trouble watching. XD Hmm, luckily I'm not a Naruto fan. *giggles*

I'm known for my weird kind of innocence. I have no real problem with watching Japanese gay porn or talking about it but when it comes to real situations I run away and hide.

I don't have many people to talk to because uh, I can't leave the house pretty much all of the time so my mom has to bear with my ramblings about writing. I conveniently leave out the fact that I'm writing BL though. Hmm, when I had relationships, they didn't mind the BL weirdly enough. XD

But it's still totally icky! I hate the cloning business and reproduction and stuff... Yeah, weird I know but that's just me. Babies are disgusting. *bricked*

I already am corrupted but yet I remain innocent. It's an interesting mix. On the other hand, I have corrupted other people and they're now less innocent than me.I haven't ( ... )