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FIC: Context is Everything (1/1) (Steve/Tony)

Apr 14, 2008 07:17

Note to self: In future, do not offer porny drabble prompts. You are incapable of writing drabble length porn. You are incapable of writing ficlet length porn. All your porn ends up being four or five pages long.

TITLE: Context is Everything
AUTHOR: Nix (crimsonquills AT gmail DOT com)
FANDOM/COMIC TITLE: New Avengers
CHARACTERS/PAIRING: Steve ( Read more... )

fic rating: nc-17, fic (my stories), fic fandom: new avengers, fic genre: slash

Comments 41

adafrog April 15 2008, 03:37:52 UTC

Oh wow. hot!

crimsonquills April 20 2008, 16:27:15 UTC

:-) Thank you!

tavella April 15 2008, 15:05:02 UTC

This is still, ridiculously, ridiculously hot. I loved Steve all but shaking with anticipation because he knows what's in Tony's head.

crimsonquills April 20 2008, 16:30:59 UTC

:-) :-) I find the idea of Steve being all hot for Tony ridiculously hot, too, possibly because he can seem so distant from things like lust in canon (at least, Avengers canon, since I've read very little of Steve's own book).

axolotl_lan April 15 2008, 16:44:40 UTC

I continue to love you. This was beautiful and hot and you made it work ZOMG!~

crimsonquills April 20 2008, 16:32:05 UTC

Yay! I'm glad you liked it. Steve's uniform gets a lot of love, and I decided the armor needed love, too. *g*

Thank you for commenting!

pandanoai April 15 2008, 21:46:13 UTC

::takes a deep breath and lets it out::

guh so good. i love that steve knows tony is going to throw him against a wall the first chance he gets and his urgency to get away from the prying eyes of the avengers.

tony ripping off steve's clothes? ::dies::

the want and love of the entire fic was so good. the pacing was awesome as well...

(also fyi-- i;m about half way finished with that pr0n i promised you... still flushingly embarrassing, but surprisingly fun to write...)

crimsonquills April 20 2008, 16:39:33 UTC

guh so good. i love that steve knows tony is going to throw him against a wall the first chance he gets and his urgency to get away from the prying eyes of the avengers.

*grins* That was one of my favorite parts, just because Steve is canon can seem really set apart from things like lust. I loved writing him being all anticipatory.

tony ripping off steve's clothes? ::dies::

*grins* Tony almost never gets the chance to do stuff like that. He really enjoyed it, I think!

the want and love of the entire fic was so good. the pacing was awesome as well...

Yay! Thank you. I always worry that fics in which the sex is meant to be fast and hot and intense don't live up to it. My sex scenes always seem to be trying to slow down, possibly because they're generally so long, in terms of words/pages.

(also fyi-- i;m about half way finished with that pr0n i promised you... still flushingly embarrassing, but surprisingly fun to write...)Double yay! Discover the joys of writing porn! *g* The embarrassment mostly goes away with a little practice, ( ... )

fire_tears April 17 2008, 16:48:32 UTC

...

I, um.

...

*points at mushy grey mess on the floor* That would be my brain. You melted it, and it leaked out my ears. I don't... I don't really know what else to say. :O Well, actually, one thing comes to mind. Everything about this is made of scorchingly hot win, but...

[1] The mention of the armor's enhanced strength. I think that speaks for itself as to why that, especially, got me. *g*

[2] Steve thinking that sex with Tony in the armor is just another part of Tony he didn't have before is perfect, because even before the Extremis, the armor was as much a part of Tony as anything else you could claim.

...

I love you for writing this.

crimsonquills April 20 2008, 16:44:59 UTC

:-) :-) :-)

*points at mushy grey mess on the floor* That would be my brain. You melted it, and it leaked out my ears.

*carefully scrapes up the brain so that it can reconstitute itself* We can't be losing brains like yours! But I still love that I achieved brain-melting. :-)

The mention of the armor's enhanced strength. I think that speaks for itself as to why that, especially, got me. *g*

*girns* I really wanted to play with that more, but I didn't have time if I wanted to keep the pace of the story fast. Alas. I almost had Tony lift Steve up and take him face-to-face with Steve's back against the wall, just for the way he'd have to use the strength. But wanting to writing the reach around won out.

Steve thinking that sex with Tony in the armor is just another part of Tony he didn't have before is perfect, because even before the Extremis, the armor was as much a part of Tony as anything else you could claim.

I did wonder if that would feel a bit OOC for Steve, just because we see lots of Tony thinking about how much a part ( ... )