Superstition

[crimsonplum]

How was I to know

Comments

[roina_arwen]

Wonderful!

[crimsonplum]

Thanks!

[itsjustc]

You've included some interesting ideas in this. I enjoyed it.

[crimsonplum]

Thank you!

[jem0000000]

*hugs* I'm glad this was fiction -- the poor narrator.

[crimsonplum]

*hugs* The structure came to me before the scene...and then I couldn't get the scene out of my head. Fiction that felt a little too real!

[solstice_singer]

Very well-written. So many questions. So few answers. How does one really know anything for sure, especially when surrounded by superstition?

[crimsonplum]

Thank you! Absolutely true. Children tend to believe what they're told, and it's hard to learn that some things aren't what you learned.

[fourzoas]

I really liked the meditation on those sayings here and how they're the things of children. Nicely done.

[crimsonplum]

Thank you! This was the best way I could think of to not be too literal.