Last dance

Mar 24, 2014 01:23

Mit keresek, en itt? Azt monjak hogy a hires lakem lefogta a ferjement en meg lecsaptam a fejet. De nem igaz, en artatlan vagyok. Nem tudom miert mondja Uncle Sam hogy en tettem. Probaltam a rendorsegen megmagyarazni de nem ertettek meg.

January 1926

I hear the heavy steps of the matron's thick shoes long before I see her. My breath catches, and ( Read more... )

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jexia March 24 2014, 08:22:14 UTC
This is GREAT. Thank you.

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crimsonplum March 24 2014, 17:18:26 UTC
Thank *you* - glad you liked it!

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swirlsofblue March 24 2014, 09:49:48 UTC
Oh, absolutely stunning, stirs so much anger and so much sympathy within just a few lines, love this, and especially that last line.

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crimsonplum March 24 2014, 17:20:17 UTC
I do like stunning and stirring! Really pleased you enjoyed it.

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crimsonplum March 24 2014, 17:21:14 UTC
I love how emphatically you say this! :) Thank you!

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stagger_lee77 March 24 2014, 12:25:18 UTC
i love this!

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crimsonplum March 24 2014, 17:22:12 UTC
Thanks!

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waltzmatildah March 24 2014, 12:25:53 UTC
Oh, wow. This is a lovely entry.

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crimsonplum March 24 2014, 17:23:04 UTC
"Wow" and "lovely" are always most welcome. Thank you!

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