Fic; desconhecido [Lost, PG-13] Part 2/?

[crimsongrace]

Title: desconhecido
Author: sweetbelle07
Character(s): Jack/Kate
Rating: PG-13 for now, could go as high as NC-17
Summery: She’s been killing herself for the past three weeks, trying to find him, save him from the Others and he’s been living in a house.
A/N: I was unpleased with how everyone reacted to Jack not coming back with Kate and Sawyer, so I changed

Comments

[marzycielka]

loved it :) the circles were totally evil but finally Kate got something out of Jack and that's good. it's sad that his words are hurting her and that her puppy suffers but honestly I can understand why Jack acted the way he did. I would probably want to be as far away from the island too if I was him. but I hope Kate can convince him otherwise :).
as always, I loved Kate's way of thinking. this V
Right led her to him, so she’s not complaining... much.

Well, a lot.

Well, somewhat.

Wweeeellll, out loud.
almost made me lol, even though the whole conversation is rather heartbreaking...

I can't wait for more :P

[sweetbelle07]

Lol. That's probably my favorite part of the chapter. It's how my brain thinks. Just contradicts itself all the time, lol.

I'm glad you like it. :D

[sweetbelle07]

Oh, I'll most decidedly keep going with this, though it'll probably take me months to finish it because I've got massive writing ADD. lol.

[sweetbelle07]

It means that I am easily distracted when I write. Like, I'll start adding more to this story and then suddenly decide that I have to go read HP fanfiction and that makes me want to finish one of my Heroes things and by the time I realize that I was writing Jate, I can't remember what my original train of thought with the story was and it's really confusing to be me.

[xunderstatedx]

OMG the poor puppy!! And the angst!

*snatches Jack and doesn't let him leave*

And why does Jack have to be so damn stubborn and wouldn't answer her and ran circles around her and broke both our hearts.

He better not leave. He won't.

[sweetbelle07]

You have really little faith in my Jate love if you think I'm going to let Jack leave that easily. ;)

Because he's Jack and he's made out of stubborn. lol

[xunderstatedx]

I have every faith in your Jate love:P Doesn't stop me going along with the story and the OMG HE'S LEAVING?! mentality. IDK.

[twistdmentality]

OMG, I love your writing style. The snarkiness has me in stiches on the floor, so much so that even with the angst of Jack potentially leaving I couldn't stop cackling especially with the last line.

[sweetbelle07]

Aw thank you. It's kinda of meant to be humorous, even though it's going straight for angstland. My brain works in weird ways. lol

[mikachoo108]

love the circles idea, love the puppy thing...and OMG JACK'S LEAVING IN THREE DAYS!!! NO!!! He has to stay!!!! Kate LOVES him for God's sake!!!