[Fic] Six Months of Tea

Oct 29, 2007 15:24


Title: Six Months of Tea
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Characters: Oshitari Yuushi / Taki Haginosuke
Claim: Prince of Tennis: General Fandom
Prompt: #09 - Months
Word Count: 1 933
Rating: Light R
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fandom: tenipuri, taki haginosuke, comm: au100, fic

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starlightstorm October 29 2007, 23:27:08 UTC
Hot. <3 And very descriptive; I felt like I could see everything that was going on very clearly. ... And hot. XD;

Does this belong in a series, by chance? It feels very much like it does.

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crimson_raining October 29 2007, 23:42:54 UTC
Thank you ^_^ This one was harder to do then normal X3 I'm really glad that it was clear~

I was thinking of doing more with it, maybe adding a sequel or just more to it, that could be why it feels like there should be more. ^_^;;

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passionfire October 30 2007, 00:00:05 UTC
Hee, Oshitari/Taki is a guilty pleasure of mine so I was really happy to see this. I really enjoyed this, as hikariblue stated, it's very hot and has nice descriptive visuals. I really loved Taki's response to Gakuto's messages, the mention of him working late, and the idea of him having a routine of tea.

I have a few nitpicks for you, mostly that it's "Mukahi" rather than "Muhaki" and there were a few missed commas here and there (there should be a comma between "birthday" and "Haginosuke" in the last line). That's all I can remember seeing offhand.

I'm really happy that somebody else remembered Taki's birthday and I hope that you'll write more of these two. Taki seriously can't get enough fic. :D

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crimson_raining October 30 2007, 00:55:46 UTC
Oshitari/Taki I think is my closet OPT (doesn't count as a closet if I admit it?), I love writing them together. Thank you, I tried hard on the little details, it makes me happy to hear that I didn't waste my time with them ^_^

Funny how you can have four pairs of eyes look at something and still miss things, I'll go fix them ASAP~

That's how I was feeling when I saw hikariblue's post of fan art (which reminds me I should post my cosplay pictures to a comm or two). You don't have to hope for more of them, Oshitari/Taki is going to be one of my main pairings for my Au of d00m that I am working on right now ^_^ I'll get Taki more fic even if I have too write every single one of them myself! *vows*

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serenia October 30 2007, 03:51:34 UTC
Aww, that was sweet! Taki never gets much love.

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crimson_raining October 31 2007, 10:28:31 UTC
^_^ thank you! I know, it makes me sad ;.;

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shikanashi_kk November 3 2007, 19:06:38 UTC
LOVE. <3333

akjdhkjhgdgh I'm sorry, I'm incoherent right now. ♥

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crimson_raining November 3 2007, 20:30:36 UTC
^______^

That's quite alright, I'm glad that I could induce someone to incoherency ♥♥♥

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