Oh I love this! So very much. I really like the way you've written Claire here - a lot darker and a lot more bitter. Definitely different from the way you usually write her but still amazing. That section with her and Sawyer is just so perfect. Kinda made my heart hurt lol but in a good way. And this line?
When Jack points north, they go north. When Claire says she's tired, they crawl into bed with her. When Sawyer tightens his fist, Jack and Claire are there to pull him back.
UGH YES. SO THEM! That's like everything I love about this ship in one little sentence. You are awesome :)
Wow thank you! I was really just winging it! haha. So glad you liked this. It was definitely fun to write the three of them again. I should do that more often.
This is just spectacularly beautiful and so perfect. No one writes them like you do. Your Claire voice is always so natural. I really, really love this.
I love Claire in this, you could always feels this edge to her in the show, but they seemed reluctant to really show it, I love how you explore that part of her so beautifully. Gorgeous fic.
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I really like the way you've written Claire here - a lot darker and a lot more bitter. Definitely different from the way you usually write her but still amazing.
That section with her and Sawyer is just so perfect. Kinda made my heart hurt lol but in a good way.
And this line?
When Jack points north, they go north. When Claire says she's tired, they crawl into bed with her. When Sawyer tightens his fist, Jack and Claire are there to pull him back.
UGH YES. SO THEM! That's like everything I love about this ship in one little sentence. You are awesome :)
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BTW - Happy Birthday, I hope you have a great day xx
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