[fic] you'll have to find your own way home, boys; lost, claire/jack/sawyer; pg

Nov 21, 2010 20:54

title; rating: you'll have to find your own way home, boys; r
fandom, pairing; count:lost, claire/jack/sawyer, 513
notes: for gigglemonster
and really, she's okay with that )

the shephards, fanfic: lost, !fanfic

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gigglemonster November 22 2010, 02:00:46 UTC
Oh I love this! So very much.
I really like the way you've written Claire here - a lot darker and a lot more bitter. Definitely different from the way you usually write her but still amazing.
That section with her and Sawyer is just so perfect. Kinda made my heart hurt lol but in a good way.
And this line?

When Jack points north, they go north. When Claire says she's tired, they crawl into bed with her. When Sawyer tightens his fist, Jack and Claire are there to pull him back.

UGH YES. SO THEM! That's like everything I love about this ship in one little sentence. You are awesome :)

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crickets November 22 2010, 02:05:05 UTC
Wow thank you! I was really just winging it! haha. So glad you liked this. It was definitely fun to write the three of them again. I should do that more often.

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haldoor November 22 2010, 10:01:15 UTC
I really like the minimalist way you picture them; you say so much so concisely. She is very bitter in this one, isn't she? But that works too. ;-)

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crickets December 25 2010, 05:26:46 UTC
Thank you so much! I am sorry I forgot to comment on this! But thank you!

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angela_weber November 22 2010, 12:31:13 UTC
This is just spectacularly beautiful and so perfect. No one writes them like you do. Your Claire voice is always so natural. I really, really love this.

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crickets December 25 2010, 05:26:57 UTC
Thank you dear! Sorry so late!

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siluria November 22 2010, 22:26:13 UTC
Oooo, great Claire voice!!! Very nice!

BTW - Happy Birthday, I hope you have a great day xx

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crickets December 25 2010, 05:27:10 UTC
Thank you so much! I completely forgot to comment to these!

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ozmissage November 23 2010, 20:07:24 UTC
I love Claire in this, you could always feels this edge to her in the show, but they seemed reluctant to really show it, I love how you explore that part of her so beautifully. Gorgeous fic.

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crickets December 25 2010, 05:27:31 UTC
Thank you! I really love writing her with an edge. It's one of my favorite ways to explore her character.

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