[fic] tell us what's wrong [and what's right]; dollhouse, topher/priya; r

[crickets]

title, rating: tell us what's wrong [and what's right], r
fandom, pairing; prompt; count: topher/priya; forbidden; 803
notes: for faded_facade for the five acts meme [yes, this is me writing fic on the last night of my vacation]

Comments

[gigglemonster]

Aw this is AMAAAAZING! I agree, I've always really liked the idea of this pairing and this just proves why it's awesome lol
I really enjoyed the way you added the little bits of their scrip from the dollhouse - that makes a huge impact.
And lines like these

He's told her of innocents, and evil men, and evil deeds. And she had listened and held his hand and offered him forgiveness.

Pure fucking poetry dude, I swear. I love love love this so much!

[crickets]

Wow, how did I never respond to any of these comments! Thank you thank you! :)

[kay_obsessive]

Oh man, I have such a soft spot for this pairing, and I've wanted Topher/Priya-on-the-run fic to exist since Belonging aired. This is just really fantastic!

[crickets]

Oh trust me I do too! Sorry this comment is so late. I appreciate it very much!

[faded_facade]

Oh wow, thank you so much for this! I had like such a soft spot for the pairing ever since "Haunted", even though that really wasn't Sierra or Priya and was an imprint. But there was still something there. And that stuff got worked into the fic, which made this even more awesome.

Love the idea of Topher and Priya on the run and I especially loved this:
"Don't you trust me?" she asks.

"With my life," he tells her. And this isn't some script he's memorized, some role that's been implanted.

Bottom line, I loved the fic. Thank you!

[crickets]

I love this pairing very much as well. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and respond. I have no idea why I never responded to any of these comments! Thank you so much once again!

[viridian]

AWESOME. I'm currently enamored of pairing Topher with basically anyone. I kind of secretly ship Topher/whoever Claire was before she was Whiskey, because I think there was something there & that's why he was insistent that she not know him.

But we don't get enough of Priya, so I approve of including her in ships.

[crickets]

Topher is pretty excellent.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. And I do apologize for not seeing these comments sooner! Very much appreciated!

[dazzlebug]

Beautiful. I heart these two, thank you for making me love them even more :)

[crickets]

Aw, well thank you! They are truly lovely.

Sorry for the late response but I did want to let you know that I appreciate it.