[fic] the fruit will be bruised; lost, claire, christian, jack; pg

[crickets]

title; rating: the fruit will be bruised, pg
fandom, characters; wordcount: lost, claire, jack, christian; 501
notes: for flaky_artist who requested mysteries, mythology, claire and christian shephard

Comments

[flaky_artist]

I love creepy cryptic ghost Christian.

"There's a frog at the bottom of the well," she says.
"I understand," Jack nods, gravely. "I get that."

My favorite part, I love the image of Jack here. Thank you!

[crickets]

Haha, I'm glad you liked it. I tried to make it dreamlike and strange -- maybe even a little funny. I was hoping to show how Claire may have found out about her family.

Glad you enjoyed it.

[ozmissage]

Ooh, I love this. It's almost disorienting which works beautifully.

[crickets]

Thank you! I definitely meant to be a bit disorienting. Thanks for reading this.

[hopelessfangirl]

Oooh, this is terrific! Haunting and bizarre and intriguing. I got a Whedonesque vibe off it, which is definitely a good thing. Well done!

[crickets]

Haunting and bizarre and intriguing.

I was totally going for all three of those things so thank you very much. Plus, the whedonesque comparison is so flattering. I didn't even really think about it but I totally see what you mean. What a great compliment!