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quaintheart February 15 2009, 07:37:07 UTC
you are a genius.

loved the scene in the park, rebecca, Marco, Mary, Andy.... the back story filtering through.

Classic prose. glorious vocabulary. stunning chapter.

MERCI

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criccieth February 15 2009, 23:57:00 UTC
wow. Thank you very much. that's quite a compliment! And thanks for the comment on the other post as well.

Hope you've enjoyed all four parts of this chapter. Will be revisting Rebecca, Mary and our dear friend Andy in other chapters, so glad to hear you like them all. The back story is kind of complex but I intend to keep feeding it through into the current time.

thanks again for reading and commenting. If you don't mind my asking, how did you find this? Part three went onto the comms a couple of weeks ago so I wasn't expecting anyone else to find them and read!

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quaintheart February 16 2009, 03:42:12 UTC
To be honest, when you posted to the comms, it looked complicated... four parts, kinda long! Then I hurt my back and I have spent ages in bed, reading fanfic ( ... )

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criccieth February 16 2009, 20:48:20 UTC
Didn't know until Alba told me I'd been recced. Feeling very flattered. And once again, thank you very much for such a postive comment! I am wondering if the length of this part has put people off, but out of me and three betas, this was about the shortest length we could get it too (I cut several scenes, mainy more backstory, and intend to rework those scenes for later parts).

Think I'll take a leaf out of Angtosaur's book as it were and post each chapter on my journal and then link to both it and the master list.

part 4 is being worked on - some later chapters are actually mostly written, but I'm working through my own idea of a logical progression of chapters, so don't want to post out of my order, as it were!

thanks again - for the comments and the offer of support (more encouragement, the better!)

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