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Sep 17, 2008 23:48
swimming in the breeze
bathing in the warm sunshine
- childhood memories
poetry
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5-7-5
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anonymous
September 17 2008, 21:35:15 UTC
Lovely haiku... you have the most lovely way with words. I always feel a sense of calm come over me when I read your beautiful poetry...
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cribhisui
September 19 2008, 13:04:34 UTC
Thank you for your generous comment, dear anonymous reader. ;) I am glad that my simple way of writing can bring such a positive effect on someone. <3
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autumnsea
September 18 2008, 04:39:55 UTC
Ah, what a glorious feeling I get from the line, "swimming in the breeze".
Beautiful, Jade. :)
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cribhisui
September 19 2008, 13:07:00 UTC
I'm glad you get something from my simple words, Suzy. Thank you. <3
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cribhisui
September 19 2008, 13:07:36 UTC
Thank you. :)
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Beautiful, Jade. :)
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