[fic] Alas Babylon

[creepy_crawly]

Yay, Torchwood!fic for fic_on_demand.

Title: Alas Babylon
Author: creepy_crawly
Fandom, Pairing: Torchwood, Jack/Ianto
Rating:…R+
Warnings: Darkness, torture, my sick and twisted mind, gheyness…um…that should just about cover it…
Requestor/Request: kirke_novak requested a Jack/Ianto H/C that would make, and I quote, “Countrycide look like a Care Bears episode”. Request found here

Comments

[emlyn_rune]

Wow, great story. I can't wait to see what comes next. There will be more won't there? Please? Pretty please?

[creepy_crawly]

Thank you for commenting! I'm glad that you liked the story.

Originally, I wasn't going to do more, but...well, it's kinda fueled a good half-dozen bunnies. So, yes, expect more.

[monkeyqueentart]

I love Psychic!Ianto stories.
Very nicely written! I also hope there's another part to this story!

[creepy_crawly]

Firstly: Your icon. Me. Dark alley. NOW.

Second. Thanks for your kind words! I'm glad you liked! And yeah, it's looking like there will be more...

[estarcollector]

Oh...wow. This utterly bowled me over. I like your writing style, and I love your Ianto and Jack. Please write more! I am very curious about what you could do with this.

[creepy_crawly]

Wow! Thank you so much! I am very glad that you liked this. There will be more!

[fairyd123]

Wow fantastic and very interesting story - I'd love to see it continued.

Teeny bit of constructive criticism - "police cruiser", "beat cops" and "cops" are all very American terms which leaped out at me a little when reading it, "police car" and "police" may have been better.

[creepy_crawly]

Thank you--both for commenting and for brit-picking. My "breta" is on hiatus...you know you wanna do it...*winkwinknudgenudge*

Glad you liked!

[kirke_novak]

You are awesome! :D Thank you for fulfilling my request, this fic is definitely what I had in mind. Don't worry about being nasty to Ianto, he was created so bad stuff happened to him, you help him fulfill his destiny ;)

Making Ianto part of BW was a great idea. Loved the ending and I hope that you'll write more on this ♥

[creepy_crawly]

*tips hat* Thanks for the request! Without it, who knows how this might have happened...

I'm keeping this one as a one-shot, as per fic_on_demand's rules, but...I am seriously considering making a universe around it...*grins*

Thanks for commenting. I'm glad that you liked this!