Comments | creepy_crawly: [fic] Butterflies Drink of the Dew of Your Thighs

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[fic] Butterflies Drink of the Dew of Your Thighs

Apr 23, 2010 17:07

Title: Butterflies Drink of the Dew of Your Thighs
Author: creepy_crawly
Characters/Pairings: Nico di Angelo/Stoll Twins, Nico/Pollux, Nico/Percy Jackson
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Sex, a person undergoing a sex change.
Disclaimer: No own. No money. No shame.
Summary: For a request over on pjo_kinkmeme: "Nico/Percy. Nico is transgender. Percy's okay with that...and by "okay ( Read more... )

fanfic, nico di angelo, fic, percy jackson, percy jackson and the olympians

Comments 3

lira_chan April 24 2010, 23:48:31 UTC

Oh my gods I loved that so much. Just from the bits in the header, I was kind of expecting something more pornographic. I mean, it was from the kink meme, yeah? But just... That was so lovely. Definitely struck a note with me. I love Persephone being so understanding, and I liked seeing Annabeth's POV on things as well. And just Nico. *squishes her as a her* I also personally like that she kept her name, and didn't come up with a feminized name. And Pollux and Travis and Conner were all so good to her, I think. I'm rather glad there was no trauma with one of them, which was why she moved on.

And mmmn, Nico and Percy. <3 Just... Augh, it was lovely. Thank you so much.

creepy_crawly April 25 2010, 01:59:09 UTC

Wow! Thanks for your feedback! I'm really glad that you liked it.

I originally set out to make it more porntastic, but somewhere along the way, I kinda fell in love with it more as Nico's story than as anything else. I have a friend (female) named Nico, so I figured it could be passed off as a female name, too. I'm glad that worked! I know the original prompt asked for Nico/Percy, but I kinda felt like Nico needed those other boys to validate her before we went whole-hog for Percy.

Anyway, long response is long. So I'll sum up: thank you so much! I'm glad that you liked it!!

lira_chan April 25 2010, 02:44:27 UTC

Long response is appreciated! I think it's nifty to hear what the author was thinking. :3

So you are welcome~ I did like it lots (to the point where I was putting off dinner -- "JUST ONE MORE MINUTE I have like four paragraphs I AM ALMOST DONE").

Nico as a female name works in my mind, and I totally see what you mean about the other boys. I think the one thing I was surprised about as I was reading was that there was no indication of how Percy felt about Nico earlier on. It really WAS Nico's story.