We of Nine Tails

[creepstakes]

Title: We of Nine Tails
Rating: PG for the most part, I think. At least atm.
Pairing: KuwabaraxKurama
Warnings: ...none?
Summary: Kurama is being haunted, but by whom...or what? It seems the only one that can help him is Kuwabara. But it’s been seven years and things have changed.
Notes: Alright, Spiritverse direction numero uno. ‘We of Nine

Comments

[morsmordre87]

Do I need to read anything else before reading this? (Yep, haven't read this yet). I have so many fics of yours to catch up on...*weeps tears of joy* Have started on 'Zodiac', and damn, I'm loving it.

[creepstakes]

This mainly. It's optional.

:D

I'm glad you're enjoying Zodiac.

[morsmordre87]

Okay, read both and really enjoyed them. I love the idea, and your execution is excellent. While it seems redundant to say this (because I think I say it every time), your characterisation is awesome.

(And quite frankly, glasses!Kuwabara is bloody sexy. As is this pairing.)

[kyohana]

I like this 'experiment' of yours. And this chapter... I really like seeing an intelligent and mature Kuwabara. Keep writing this, please!

[creepstakes]

Kuwabara is so full of possibilities when he's older, and he's a sweet guy at heart. I could eat him all up. :D

I'm glad you're liking it!

[blueutopiah]

This is fantastic. Just...the Kuwabara/Kurama interaction is lovely, and Kuwabara explaining the whole soul thing is something I haven't seen in fic before but really should be done.

And Kurama in tailored suit and long hair is hot. Very hot.

BTW, this doesn't seem cliched or like you've pieced it together, as you say. It flows nicely. No tense problems. It seems like you wrote it in one sitting.

[creepstakes]

I was wondering whether or not to keep the demonstration of Kurama's body inhabiting or not. He seems like a nice dude, but he's really an asshole with very little human-morals (unless it has to do with his mother). People forget that. If anything I want this to be about how inhuman he really is (at the end of the series) and how much Kuwabara has developed over the years.

Of course it's to make them all sexy too. :D

I wrote it in three sittings I think, but I obsessed over it more than I usually do.

Really glad that you like it and that it's turned out better than I had thought it would.

[akalillyn]

fiwajfjsd I really liked this. You and Blue have converted me. Kuwabara/Kurama is not horrible at all. Especially not written as well as it is in here. <3 I loved the quiet tension built up between the two, and Kuwabara's sense of honor doesn't allow him to turn Kurama away. Totally in character. And, lol, breadsticks and eggs = Kurama. Definitely. That was great. Kuwabara all grown up is still Kuwabara after all.

[creepstakes]

Kuwabara/Kurama has so many possibilities! They're so cute togeather. :D

I'm glad I pulled you over to the dark side!

[nytekit]

I love this older, intelligent Kuwabara you've described here. I could totally see him growing up and being this way, even with all the trouble he had in school on the show. I also love the unspoken foils of his and Kurama's relationship. It makes for a great chapter dynamic, and one which gives Kuwabara the upper-hand, something Kurama (since he is now "shuichi") would never have allowed. I also find it intruiging the amount of time you skipped from the first Spiritverse to this one. I don't know, I really like everything about this experiment of yours. Continue on please!

So I was just ignoring the typos and things that I saw, but this one just wouldn't let me: "old warn couch" should be "old worn couch"

[creepstakes]

I'd say he still has trouble now, but he's smart when he puts the effort into it.

Oh then tension. *pets them*

*winks* thanks for picking that up.