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Eye for an Eye : Epitaph

Apr 29, 2008 19:35

Title: Epitaph
Rating: M
Warnings: Vague descriptions of sex.
Pairings: YoukoxKuronue, YomixYouko.
Notes: I have somewhat fucked over the supermax, middle and minimum security structures (not to mention judicial system), but eh, it was necessary considering the crime and plot I had in mind. Youko couldn’t tap anything if he was in supermax because he’ ( Read more... )

eye for an eye, m, epitaph, akhenaton, fic

Comments 7

nytekit April 30 2008, 04:33:20 UTC

Hot Yomi/Youko stuff there. I love your descriptions of Youko whenever they switched positions. I like this line: Youko screamed so loud he could be heard in other wings these days. But was always strangely silent when he fucked Yomi. Not sure why I clung to it over many of the others, but I did.

Also, I love the entire idea behind this fic. You're taking your story really far, and yet not overdoing it. Wonderful job on this! And on leaving it a bit of a cliffhanger. Can't wait for the sidefic sequel.

creepstakes May 1 2008, 05:13:08 UTC

XD Thank yooou~

blueutopiah May 7 2008, 04:30:34 UTC

OMFG - you're writing a sequel? Seriously? Will there be some Shuuichi-Hiei in it? Will Youko wreak havoc? I hope so.

I love how powerful he's become inside the prison - as if it's just another rave for him to dance through. And the sex with Yomi was mind-numbing hot.

The dreams though? The dreams were scary.

creepstakes May 7 2008, 08:52:46 UTC

The sequel is told mostly through Shuuichi's perspective. So... yeah lol. And how could I deny Youko the ability to wreak havoc, hmmm? XD

That was totally not my first attempt at Yomi.

blueutopiah May 7 2008, 12:55:01 UTC

The sequel is told mostly through Shuuichi's perspective.

*shivers* Oh...oh that is very good. *begs for Hiei/Shuuichi lemon BEGS FOR IT* And ohgod if there is some Youko/Shuuichi I'll probably pop.

creepstakes May 7 2008, 12:57:06 UTC

*snickers*

I'll see what I can do.

kitsune_ko October 23 2012, 07:20:28 UTC

I'm like...4 years later, almost 5, but I finally read the side fics. Just like I told you on the other comment: You did an awesome job!

Youko's memories about Kuronue made me cry (I was feeling sad already and my still growing love for that bat demon didn't help at all).

A sequel? May I ask for the link to it? I'd really like to read it as well ^^