The Fruits of My Labour

[creepstakes]

Title: The Fruits of My Labour.
Warnings: Necrophilia! *jumps up and down* For those of you who don't know what that is it's fucking corpses!!
Pairing: KarasuxKurama
Notes: Lack of dialog disturbs me. This will go up on AFF too me thinks.
Summary: Inside and out, in life and death, this boy, this human masquerade, was his.

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The Fruits of My Labour

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Comments

[blueutopiah]

Marry me? No, really. Marry me?

I love that there is someone else out there, besides me, twisted enough to find this incredibly hot. Just UNG. It made me shiver for many different reasons.

Wow, you killed everyone. And you know what? That's what would have happened. The Dark Tournament was dark. If they didn't win, they would have been slaughtered and thrown into a bug pile of bodies...or incinerated. People forget that.

You know what I liked? You mess around with the hair. Yes, if it's long, it gets in the way. (Sex was rather annoying with hair down to my ass; I always had to tie it up first.) ignoring the way his own hair blocked Kurama from his field of vision, having him look at his red-haired possession with black streaked frames. That line? Made of awesome.

You also described Kurama's death so perfectly. I could see him frozen, with that stare. It was unnerving.

SOPRETTY. I loved this. Huzzah.

[creepstakes]

I do have a reason for not incinerating one: it loosely has something to do with the economy and the fact that not burning them would be more of an insult. They have more use if they’re body are kept in once piece.

But yeah, I’m glad you enjoyed. Not a whole lot of people like this kind of thing and I don’t really see why not. It’s the stillness in death that attracts me to it, and Kurama is just such a pretty boy it needs to be exploited.

I’m glad you liked ^^

[creepstakes]

Necrophilia is something that not everyone likes, there is a certain delicate...ness to it. Acquired taste though I think. ^^ I'm glad you liked it though.

[morsmordre87]

Well. The fact that I found this so fucking hot shows just about nothing squicks me anymore.

And really, Kurama would be a beautiful corpse. The fucking was awesome. And you probably know by now that I love your Karasu, he was perfect here.

(Argh I'm supposed to study but I get distracted by your stuff...*completely lacks dicipline*)

[creepstakes]

Yeah, fandom does tend to make people unsquickable with all the stuff possible. I think I just made a new word.

Kurama hmmm yes. Hurr hurr hurr. I’d love to see him dead. *grins*

(But…if you get it out of the way, then, it means you’ll be able to study better without knowing that there’s other stuff that you want to do… right? *shifty eyes*)

[morsmordre87]

It's better than "insquickable"...yay for fandom and the people who write awesome shit.

*shifty eyes too* That makes sense. I just tend to have a lot of things to get out of the way - when I start read one fic, it just snowballs and I'd have lost a few hours....BUT I WILL FOLLOW YOUR LOGIC because I'm a hedonistic bitch.

[nytekit]

when I start read one fic, it just snowballs and I'd have lost a few hours

You, too? I thought it was just me.

[nytekit]

This was amazing. Simply...beautiful, in a weird way. This is not the first necro fic I've read, but it's definitely the first to stay so true to the changes of the body after death as well as show Karasu's insanity so blatantly.

Really, your descriptions of him and his reactions to Kurama's completely unresponsive body made the story for me. It's like, you went to a whole new length of showing the true Karasu and not the soft-pat crazy others make him out to be. Great job. I really loved this!

[creepstakes]

The deterioration process is the best bit! See this is why we can’t relate to normal human beings Osoi. You’re too fucking weird.

Karasu is just a big ball of misunderstood fluff. He means well, his ideals are just not on par with everyone else’s. And I just described the textbook example of how an insane person views themselves. *headdesk*

Thankyou! >;p

[nytekit]

And of course you would know the textbook example of insanity.

O.O......

[boldfacedtruth]

I did not expect to like this.... Truly, I didn't... I was just reading it because I know I love your writing.... *has been converted*

Re: O.O......

[creepstakes]

Ha ha, why thank you. Such faith. Really, I'm glad to have corrupted you. :D

And it's wonderful to hear that you love my writing. I was having a bad night and you cheered me up.

Re: O.O......

[boldfacedtruth]

Happy to have cheered you! Though I'm still a much bigger fan of your Kuro/Youko and vice-versa stories, this might just begin growing on me.....