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[creeno]

Title: [unofficially] The Tower
Fandom: Donnie Darko
Rated: G
Genre: Supernatural
Short Summary: He goes where Frank tells him.

1]   Donnie must be dreaming.
    He's standing outside of a glass building, and he can feel Frank behind him, waiting. Donnie's freezing in only his Hobie shirt and boxers, feet bare in wet grass.
    He's turns to Frank,

Comments

[miri_away]

I love it. The atmosphere is quiet and comfortable, but only in the sense that this has happened before. The times Frank is recognized I like how you summed him up in little gestures, particularly the last one.

I know Donnie's breaking in somewhere but I was distracted by how...calm he was. He's so weird, you know, and the extra puff was just awesome.

I like short things like this. It's so disjointed, just like his breaks with reality, and that's poignant. I think it would be more dramatic and elegant if you spaced the lines out, though, but that's just because I wouldn't normally read something presented like this. Your first line caught me, however, and I love Darko.

[creeno]

Aha. Love your icon.

Donnie is getting used to this. I have it in a Head-AU of mine, where he and Frank work together up til his death and in afterlife, they both stick together and solve Universes and things like this. It's weird, but lot's of opportunities. It's also severely disjointed, due to the fact that it's...Donnie Darko.

I'm so anal when it comes to line spacing, though I did consider spacing out when Frank speaks. I'll probably do it next time.