There is just one word spelled wrong in this paragraph:
"At this point the gentleman got up out of his chair and came around to kneel down beside the lady. He presented the box, opening it to show her what was in the box. Once again her eyes brightened and a huge smile shown upon her face."
I believe the word should be shone (with an e) not shown (with a w). You can still edit until Friday.
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Is this how your husband proposed?
There is just one word spelled wrong in this paragraph:
"At this point the gentleman got up out of his chair and came around to kneel down beside the lady. He presented the box, opening it to show her what was in the box. Once again her eyes brightened and a huge smile shown upon her face."
I believe the word should be shone (with an e) not shown (with a w). You can still edit until Friday.
Thanks for sharing and keep writing!
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And no, my husbands proposal wasn't like this at all. LOL! He asked me to marry him in the middle of a mall. Hehehehehe!
However, I do know the couple that this story is about. Really nice folks.
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