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[feishien]

Hi, I'm new. *waves sheepishly*

I started writing this thinking it would be a great novel someday, then I changed my style and it turned into something...unexpected. I cut it short because it has nowhere to go at the moment.

Feedback would be nice; do you think this is a good writing format to go on?

Comments

[wirlia]

It made me laugh. :-)

I really like your writing, and I even liked the combination of script and prose (this coming from a person who ordinarily hates scripts). I don't know if the combination is better or worse than a different style, but it's definitely worth experimenting with. My favorite bit is the setup though and it seems like it could end up being a really entertaining story. I hope you keep going with it.

[pixiepistol]

Hello, Feishen!! Welcome to Creative Writer!! I'm Aly, the Maintainer here at Creative Writer. I'll be posting an update tomorrow to let you know why I've been so absent of late.

I enjoyed your script/prose! There are a couple of words that seemed a little precocious for the character....'glorious precipitation' but that might be my Americanized lazy slang, too. I did enjoy it, I hope you will stretch it out and see where it goes to answer all those questions that Mr. Canvas presents!!!

:)
Aly

[anonymous]

You have an interesting unique style of writing. I think it is good. You should keep it up.