Shaken 4/?

Jun 22, 2010 02:02

Title: Shaken 4/?
Pairing: SVU A/O
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Alex and Olivia are not my characters. I try to do them justice (no pun intended), though.

Spoilers: For this chapter... Fallacy

Summary: This story opens immediately after the ending of Fallacy, so it starts out intense.  They help each other make sense of the world of SVU, and their ( Read more... )

a/o, svu, shaken

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laurel_hardy June 22 2010, 16:00:04 UTC
I TOLD you this was interesting. And it just got more so. I wasn't expecting the whole Sudanese connection. Alex is going to have to brush up on civil law, although I'm sure she'll be just as savvy as she is in criminal court.

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creativestreet June 22 2010, 22:29:25 UTC
I'm REALLY glad it's interesting for you! And it's helpful feedback. On the show there are tons of international plot lines/human rights abuse plot lines, and I know a little about Sudan, so, ta da ;) I'm actually basing Eve and Isaac off of two people I met, although the woman was much more traumatized than Eve.

I also see Alex as a humanitarian-in-the-making on the show, so I want to build that into her character here. So is Olivia, just in different ways. Thanks for reading :)

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creativestreet June 24 2010, 19:54:09 UTC
Thanks. Really, though? I'm not sure it's holding most peoples' interest (judging on the fact that the numbers of comments are going down).

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creativestreet June 28 2010, 04:51:21 UTC
Right, so I might write you a book of thoughts in response ( ... )

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1shinyboat June 29 2010, 14:50:26 UTC
Playing catch up to my comments, so...sorry for the delay I read this while I was at the airport last week, yes fanfic is bad, I have a small addiction =0)

But it was great addition to the story, the build is good and the characters' voice is excellent.

Thanks for the read and curing some of my boredom =0)

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creativestreet June 29 2010, 19:40:59 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad that the build feels like it's at a good pace and holds your interest. You're welcome for curing some of your boredom :) Reading is good for that!

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