FIC: The Things They Don't Tell You (Percy/Oliver, NC17)

[creativeslumber]

Title: The Things They Don't Tell You
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Percy/Oliver
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~3500
Summary: You had a plan, a path, a purpose, but nobody told you things didn't always work out to your liking.
Additional Notes: Way belated post, but I figured it better be in here for archiving purposes. I wrote this last year for artemis_sparks for hp_yule_balls

Comments

[yasonablack]

OMG this is AMAZING! I loved your use of second-person in here and the whole drudging aspect of the real world that the wizarding world has.

[slumber]

Thank you! :D I adore second person but I know a lot of people tend to be wary of it. :P

[herbeautifullie]

I read this earlier (and I know I already told you I enjoyed it) but I wanted to re-read on a computer screen to capture it in it's entirety and I have to say it's amazing. I've always been a secret Oliver/Percy fan and this is probably the best piece about the two I've ever read. Their personalities are so true to canon and starting with breakfast and ending with breakfast was a great way to tie it all together --the contrasting mornings showing the difference between being with Oliver and without him was so sweet! ♥

Great job! And thanks for sharing the example with me! It's made me feel so much more confidant!

[slumber]

Aww, thank you bb! <3 Like I said, I really enjoy reading this POV and I'm excited to see what you're writing soon! :D