FIC: Never the Straight and Narrow (Draco/Astoria, Draco/Pansy, PG13)

[creativeslumber]

Title: Never the Straight and Narrow
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Draco/Astoria, Draco/Pansy
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~1000
Summary: The problem with Slytherins was that they never did anything in a straightforward manner.
Additional Notes: Muchos gracias to ccharlotte for the beta. Written for the hp_unfaithful's Fabulous No-Pressure Laissez-Faire Challenge. Prompt: "

Comments

[nuclearsugars]

Oh I loved how you started this fic. The premise is amazing, not so much Astoria finding out about Draco and Pansy, but how underhanded and sneaky the lot of the post-Hogwarts Slyterins. Great job!

[slumber]

Thank you! :)

[purplefluffycat]

Intriguing and enjoyable. I particularly liked the way you describe 'Slytherins do things' and this whole parallel world of motivation and facilitation they seem to have. I also got a good sense of Astoria as a person here - which is no mean feat!

PurpleFluffyCat x

[slumber]

Aww, thank you for the comment! I disliked Astoria as soon as I learned about her but she's grown on me somehow since then. :P

[westernredcedar]

I love all the twists of polyjuice use- what a great tool for infidelity fic!! Heh. Great portrait of Astoria.

[slumber]

I will not lie; polyjuice has got to be the single greatest plot device invented. I use it too shamelessly. :P Thanks for reading!

[acidpop25]

Haha, Astoria is so conniving, I love it.

[slumber]

:D

[greenapricot]

Ah, Slytherins. I do love them and all their ridiculous complications.

[slumber]

I loooooooooove your icon. Draco! ♥

And Slytherins just keep interesting. :D