FIC: Undercurrents (Blaise/Terry)

[creativeslumber]

Title: Undercurrents
Pairing: Blaise/Terry
Rating: PG13
Word Count: 1700 words
Warnings: Language, Possible Parenthesis Abuse
Summary: Terry's fifth year is terrible--he isn't prefect, there's some stupid defense club going around, and all Hogwarts Houses are a disgrace, among other things.
Additional Notes: Originally titled TerryFic, but later

Comments

[fallenravie]

I like it lots. Ver nice.

[slumber]

Yay thanks! \o/

[alia_eternal]

Too good. It reminded me of a fic Maya mistful) wrote from a Hufflepuff perspective. I loved your use of parenthesis to depict Boot’s inner monologue almost. It all seemed so perfectly Ravenclaw and this line in particular seemed to really fit the bill;
“but he liked Umbridge's class (memorise, remember, know on theoretical levels, who cares about actual practicals, he wasn't going to fight)”
So bookishly Ravenclaw (no offence Raavenclaws)
I loved the little exchange between Boot and Zabini at the end and its complete formality.
Just a lovely little piece, can’t compliment you enough.

[creativeslumber]

Oh wow, thank you! :D

[thethirdbar]

Melikes. :D

[creativeslumber]

*beams*

[starflowers]

Aww, I loved how each section ended with a thought about the different houses. And all of the insight into Terry's head were brilliant, particularly the bit about Dumbledore's Army, and the lack of prefect-ness, very very good, loads of big words I didn't understand, haha.

[creativeslumber]

*grins* Thanks. :D The prefectness is an issue for me, haha. <3

[boho]

This truly is TerryFic. :D *snorts*

I heart this. Lots. I heart the parenthesis. I heart the flow. I heart the Terry. Heart it all.

(Am lame at reviews, but. yes. Heart.)

[creativeslumber]

*snickers* Makes me wanna keep writing TerryFic :|

And and and yay, thanks! I heart you. :D