DW Fic: The Human Experience (3/5)

[creativelullaby]

Title: The Human Experience (3/5)
Author: irishlullaby
Beta: amyo67 & amberfocus
Rated: Adult
Pairing/Characters: Nine/Rose, Martha Jones
Summary: The Doctor, Rose, and their new friend Martha Jones have to hide in 1913 from the Family.

The rest of the series: H E R E

Comments

[ms_sardonicus]

a chance to take a look at what Rose had been like without the Doctor attached to her pelvis. BWAHAHAHA!! Best line ever!

Love this story so much! John Smith isn't the only one who just wants sex, sex and more sex. Let them shag like bunnies, I say. Unline Ten, I like how the shy and quiet Nine!Smith is quite the 'Oncoming Storm' as far as Rose and Martha are concerned. I also like how you have worked the confusion of choosing John Smith or the Doctor squarely on Rose's shoulders. She loves them both, even though they are sort of the same man. What would she do? And how painful that decision will be....Thank goodness Martha is there to help her when the time comes...

Also... I see what you did there! ------> She would be happy if he was nothing more than a human clone, so long as he remembered everything they had been through.

EDIT: Your smut is so powerful, I can't seem to write a coherent sentence. Hope you enjoyed your TARDIS cake and b-day party.

[irishlullaby]

BWAHAHAHA!! Best line ever!
I admit... I LOL'd a bit when I re-read the paragraph once I was done writing it.

Let them shag like bunnies, I say.
Me too!

I also like how you have worked the confusion of choosing John Smith or the Doctor squarely on Rose's shoulders. She loves them both, even though they are sort of the same man. What would she do? And how painful that decision will be....Thank goodness Martha is there to help her when the time comes...
Oh just wait until next Sunday. I wibbled a bit while writing it.

Also... I see what you did there! ------>
>:) Couldn't resist.

Hope you enjoyed your TARDIS cake and b-day party.
I did! :DDD

[bratflorida]

This fic has convinced me that EVERY ep can be improved by adding Nine and a good helping of smut. Ok, I admit that I wasn't hard to convince, but this is SO GOOD! This!

With the proper Doctor they could go a few days, weeks even, between sessions of making love. It would go on for hours at a time, until she was practically a boneless heap in the bed. But with John it seemed to just be sex, sex, sex, and more sex. It sometimes felt like he depended on it for survival. And she still ended up feeling like a boneless heap afterwards.

Ah yess...after a round with the Doctor, I imagine Rose would feel like a 'boneless heap'. Great stuff!

[irishlullaby]

This fic has convinced me that EVERY ep can be improved by adding Nine and a good helping of smut.

Everything is better with Nine.... XDD

Ah yess...after a round with the Doctor, I imagine Rose would feel like a 'boneless heap'.
Well that 900 years of experience has to good for something ;)

[geordie_chick]

^^ What these lovelies said and also, smut aside I love this para the most "Rse tried to twist out of Mister Clark’s grip unsuccessfully. Her eyes met John’s and she shivered at what she saw there. There was dark fury burning deep within the pale blue eyes. His jaw twitched as he clenched his teeth, nostrils flared."

Oooooh, yummy!

xxxx

[irishlullaby]

No one messes with John/Doctor's Rose & Martha. :D

[emraldeyedauter]

Well that was a fine chapter indeed. Glad you didn't put the shagging in at the dance till near the end of it though because I'm not sure I could quite concentrate on the plot line after that. But angry John Smith is as attention grabbing as was Ten in the episode and watch out family of blood because you;re in for it now.

[othermewriter]

oh dear I do so hate that scene.