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Lost

Oct 17, 2006 19:18

Title: Lost
Author: ragingindie47
Rating: PG-13
Time: Post-X3
Disclaimer: I don't own X-Men.
Summary: Kitty Pryde stared out into the snow that was falling on this beautiful New York City night.
Author's note: This is angsty. And sad.
Reviews and comments are appreciated!
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Dedication: For earlywinter for the angsty idea ( Read more... )

fic, kitty, kyro, pyro

Comments 21

rose_fleur October 17 2006, 20:13:48 UTC

Wow, I really liked this. Please tell me this is the first offering of a longer fic? Please? Pretty please?

My favorite line was: "he was gone, she was gone. If he was gone, she was lost."

This really conveyed their feelings well. Well done you! Thanks for posting this. : )

ragingindie47 October 22 2006, 15:13:43 UTC

Thank you so much!

I think I am going to make this into a longer fic...

I'm so happy you liked this! Look for an update soon!

Thank you for reviewing!

skf_uk October 17 2006, 20:39:58 UTC

-gasp- *choke*

So...sad!!!

(But good.

Obviously.)

ragingindie47 October 22 2006, 15:15:37 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it.

Thanks for reviewing!

:-)

arliddian October 17 2006, 20:43:35 UTC

Woah. Woah, that is...that is just beautiful. Heart-breakingly beautiful.

I loved it. And I can't think of anything else to say. =)

ragingindie47 October 22 2006, 15:16:40 UTC

Wow! Thank you so much!

I'm really glad you liked it.

Thank you for reviewing!

:-)

petitebelette October 17 2006, 21:46:26 UTC

You're right: This is sad. Really heartbreakingly sad. :( Good work, Tegan.

ragingindie47 October 22 2006, 15:18:10 UTC

Thanks Crystal! I'm really glad you liked it...even though it was really sad.

Thanks for reviewing!

:-)

kultiras October 18 2006, 00:38:17 UTC

Tegan… this is… wow.

This is just so sad, and so beautifully written. I like that Kitty has someone she can lean on at college, someone who isn't afraid of her because of her mutation.

And the scene with Logan just hit me. Both of them breaking down, both of them lost. He had nothing left, no one had anything left. So perfect. So heartbreaking.

She was lost. And she needed to be found. Any chance for another part?

ragingindie47 October 22 2006, 15:19:52 UTC

Wow thank you so much!

Thank you so much for this great review! I'm really glad you like it!

Yes there is a chance for another part...I'll be posting it soon!

Thank you for reviewing!

:-)