Right now it's common for him because of an element that will be explained further down. As for what you say about the verbal structure, I agree. The problem here is that when I was originally setting him up, I would get told to push his speech one way, then another, then that way - it really got fucked and the only way people would leave me alone is if I left it at anime speaking.
But I'm explaining it off ICly with a plot that's been running since he came through that door. i wouldn't have let myself care who said what if it didn't help me out. It's good critique, and thank you, but all of the 'wrongs' right now are there on purpose. Something happened to him that I believe would have developed these changes. Once he gets to the end of this is when the real game starts.
Answering this one point, as well: IP logging is on here automatically, I didn't set it up. But if someone wants to be anonymous and IPless, they can PM me. This dropbox isn't here for crit, but for messages from another game that hasn't started yet.
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But I'm explaining it off ICly with a plot that's been running since he came through that door. i wouldn't have let myself care who said what if it didn't help me out. It's good critique, and thank you, but all of the 'wrongs' right now are there on purpose. Something happened to him that I believe would have developed these changes. Once he gets to the end of this is when the real game starts.
Answering this one point, as well: IP logging is on here automatically, I didn't set it up. But if someone wants to be anonymous and IPless, they can PM me. This dropbox isn't here for crit, but for messages from another game that hasn't started yet.
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