Title: Perfect in Venice Fandom: Harry Potter Pairing: Neville Longbottom x Katie Bell Theme set: Alpha Rating: Generally PG-13 Warnings: Some hints at sex, but nothing explicit
I enjoyed this so much! What a great idea (and a novel one) to pair Neville the non-flyer with the Quidditch-playing Katie. I like the way their tenderness for each comes through as well as the contrast in personalities.
Thanks! while I wish I could say the idea of the pairing was mine I actually found it on fiction alley's SCUSA board. I'm really glad the contrast in their personalities came out too as this is sort of a warm-up for a fic I'm writing with the two of them.
I come from said SCUSA thread! (I'm yes_ma'am.) And...I love this. It's so sweet. And the way you capture their personality contrasts really is perfect. I especially liked #17 (Belief) because it seems just like to sort of thing Neville would say. ♥ I look forward to reading your fic. ...I'm going to friend you.
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This was the first Neville/Katie I'd read, I would definitely read more.
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