Fic: And This is Goodbye: Perfection

[crazysexy_cool]

Title: And This is Goodbye: Perfection
Rating: PG-13
Pairings: Cho/Cedric, Cho/Harry; mostly gen
Notes: I don't know what the title's supposed to mean
Summary: How do you let go of someone you never had?

Comments

[magicicada]

This was wonderful. I love the concept and how believiable it is, and I especially love Cho's voice. It's so nice to see her outside of Harry's perceptions. Here she's bitter and conflicted, and it's very obvious that she's mourning, even if she doesn't quite know how. Very nice.

[crazysexy_cool]

*Blushes* Hee, thank you very much! I was afraid that she'd seem OOC so I'm glad you like it.

it's very obvious that she's mourning, even if she doesn't quite know how

That's exactly the point I was trying to make.

[i_feed_onmisery]

Sweetie, this is wonderful. I don't even like Cho Chang but she's easy to empathise with here and it makes me wonder, is she going mad?

[crazysexy_cool]

Thank you! You won't believe how flattered I am; I know you don't like Cho so it means a lot that you can empathise with her here. *hugs*

[treehorse]

You know, I normally dislike first person POV, but it really works here. I really liked how you portrayed Cho as cynical, bitter and confused. It's such a nice change from the 2D Kleenex girl that Cho is often likened to. Lovely.

[crazysexy_cool]

Thanks! :) I've never tried first person before and I was a little apprehensive about it.

I really liked how you portrayed Cho as cynical, bitter and confused.

Judging from the way she acted in OotP, I'd imagine that she has quite a few unresolved issues rattling around in her head and lord knows, she certainly doesn't deserve all the flak she gets in the fandom. Thank you again for reviewing!

[diabolicalwoman]

Wow! I usually haaate Cho Chang, but she was wonderful in this! Kudos to you! I can relate to this sort of topic as well, so it was that much more enjoyable. I like the style you chose, I haven't read it before.

It’s not the memories that make me unhappy, of course it’s not. It’s remembering them that’s painful.

So true, so sad ='( Cedric was the shizz!

[crazysexy_cool]

Thanks! :D

I've never written anything in this style before, and I'm glad to know that you liked it! And Cedric did rock.

[anonymous]

um...well Cho sux in canon but i like her here, she feels real and and i can understand her.

[crazysexy_cool]

Thanks. :)