{Repost} Sir Jinki in Love! (Chapter 5)
Title: Sir Jinki in Love
Author: kuro_kakeru
Genre: Romance, Drama
Side Pairing: Just a pinch of Minho/Taemin at the beginning chapters
Rating: PG-15
Summary: NOW HIRING! Kim Taemin the smartest kid in school, the son of Kim Kibum, is in need of a tutor! His terror teacher in chemistry, Sir Lee Jinki, is just too strict and loves making difficult exams! His dad ( Read more... )
Author: kuro_kakeru
Genre: Romance, Drama
Side Pairing: Just a pinch of Minho/Taemin at the beginning chapters
Rating: PG-15
Summary: NOW HIRING! Kim Taemin the smartest kid in school, the son of Kim Kibum, is in need of a tutor! His terror teacher in chemistry, Sir Lee Jinki, is just too strict and loves making difficult exams! His dad ( Read more... )
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Lol. I hope this makes more sense now.
Thank you so much for pointing the mistakes out... >_< I was really surprised when I saw it..
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it feels more complete now and definitely flows better :D
but i would like to point that you used the wrong pronoun in these sentences:
“Sir Lee! I’m already done answering the ques- Mom?” Taemin couldn’t finish his sentence when he saw her mom looking at him. He ran towards her before giving her a tight hug. He missed her.
Kibum stared at the scene in front of him. He couldn’t forbid Nicole from seeing Taemin since she was still her mother. But the thought of what happened between him and the confused looked teacher beside him and of how his ex-wife witnessed this bothered his mind more.
instead of her i think you meant to use his since i don't think taemin is a girl in this fic XD
very nice chapter though :D
can't wait for next update. now that they realized their feelings but their relationship is forbidden things will definitely get interesting :D heeheehee drama to come :D
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Hopefully I'll be able to update soon too~ *sighs*
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I hope this made sense now. Lol
Thanks for noticing it. Aigoooo.... *sighs*
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i spot! =D HAHAH! -hugs- dont worry about it!
oh yess! both have fallen.
lets hope they cant get up. ;D
they need each other ya knowww!
hehehhe, okay! update soon, unnie! =D
love you vvvv much! <3
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I love you too and unnie misses you very much!
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Hahahahaha, oh my god can I just skip these cheesy parts and go to the hot make up sexy smut part!! OK I WAS JUST JOKING OTL I can't even read smut.
And like, I wanna smack them both, W H A T D8 Why can't they just get it on
LMAO OTL This reminds me of my darkest sin.... I cry
“… So that’s how you get the percent composition of magnesium in a molecule of magnesium bromide.” Jinki taught Taemin clearly and the concentrated gaze and nod from the student caused his lips to form a small smile.
What even? I didn't understand a word ;~~~~;
Aw, he'll stop tutoring Taemin, I wonder how they'll meet afterwards ;a;
And Nicole's Taemin's mom! Well, they kinda look the same, if you have Taemin in mushroom hair and Nicole in the apple cut lol.
AND O M G QURL You spelled my name wrongly, it's caffelattae hahahahaha. /fail/
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Aigoooo... So you like sexy hot smut huh??? >:)))) Now I can blackmail you. kekekeke....
LOL! Do I need to explain to you how to get the percent composition??? :)) Just get a tutor like Jinki!! XD XD
FAIL! Why did you have to spell your username like that?!?! It's your fault!!! :))
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ppfffft I don't like those! D8
and uh "CAFFE LATTAE" 8D It's easy D8
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