moonlight

[choon_hee]

Disclaimer : Shinee isn't mine :D I just own the plot
Pairing : 2min
Rating : Pg - 13
Beta: personified thank you for the beta dear >___< i like it so much
Summary : Minho is just a normal teen, with a normal life until, in a rainy days he find a lost boy that capturing his eyes.his day become brighter, after mee the mysterious boym who's he? why he feel

Comments

[kuro_kakeru]

OMOOOO~ You wrote 2min~ <3 Your unnie is very delighted. <3 kekekekeke...

It's kinda awkward that Minho is onkey's son but I'll get used to it. XD XD

Where's jjong!?!?! Why isn't my husband here??? DX DX LOL

[mankadi]

sweetie!!!
its really good :))
you eve fixed the fixed one a little ^^
unnie really like this and im glad i could help you :"D
waiting for next <33

[sashitae]

HOMG, it's a chaptered story right? I'm liking it already!!!
Innocent!Taemin is the cutest!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter!!! WOOT!!!

[nyssaki]

*waves* Hi! I'm curious.. how old are you, that is, if you want to tell me ^^

I think your story is very cute; I, myself is not good at writing cute, hahhaha >///<
but if I'm allowed to give an advice, please make an effort in the language (especially the verbs) ^.^
English is my second language too (actually it's my third) so we're probably in the same boat here - I know how hard it is to write in a language that is not your own mother tongue.

Keep writing, practice make perfect and I know lots of readers out there will love the cute story ♥

[pinkbiohazard]

Hey most of this story is really heartwarming! And I know you worked hard on the English, good work and keep trying :)