July flashfic: Dream a Wicked Dream

[crazydiamond_]

For July's iy_flashfic:

Comments

[dqbunny]

Very good! And it's interesting how you swapped their sexes for their modern incarnations.

[amara_anon]

The ending completely surprised me. I never suspected Naraku was the girl.

[lynnxlady]

Ooh. Nice. And I love the reincarnation genderswitching.

[paynesgrey]

OMG I LOVE THIS!!!
I love the twist on gendes in the end. I never saw it coming. Brilliant imagery and great composition! This is a wonderful tribute to my favorite pairing.

[alf_b]

*jaw drops* Am LOVING the plot twist! (I love good plot twists in general, so you've won my heart with this one :) ) The switch of genders is quite a clever touch! I am sooooo fangirling this fic *snuggles it*

Adoring your writing style, by the way. It's so crisp and clear without the sense of trying too hard to be so (my issue). Honestly, truly, a great job :)

I know it's silly to friend someone for a fic alone, but...*fidgets shyly*...may I?

[hardlyfatal]

Hee. I'm so happy you liked it! I was worried the surprise at the end was stupid and obvious, or that it was too short, or any number of things. Thank you so much! You're so sweet :)

Sure, friend away :)

[alf_b]

I totally DID NOT see it coming! It's interesting how such a little detail could change one's perspective of a character so much.