Lonesometown, Population: Two

Dec 17, 2005 01:32


Here's chapter two of Lonesometown. I wrote it months ago, even had it betaed, and promptly forgot all about it. Wah. Hope you like it, enjoy.

Population: One was here.

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i loved it wildwesternwind December 16 2005, 22:53:20 UTC
much love to shunsui! (if only nanao-chan understood her silly drunken captain's undying love for her...sooo cute those two) and poor rangiku, i feel for her. Very wonderfully written chapter and much love to this fic in general. awesome work i say! cant wait for more!

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Re: i loved it hardlyfatal December 16 2005, 23:12:17 UTC
Thanks so much!

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adesso December 16 2005, 23:01:30 UTC
Ahaha, wow, I was just thinking recently that those two would make awesome drinking buddies. XD Anyway, SO MUCH LOVE. Wonderfully written with perfect characterization (the Shunsui/Nanao interaction especially was spot-on), just like the previous installment. I'm really looking forward to more of this. :D

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hardlyfatal December 16 2005, 23:11:48 UTC
Hah, I just replied to your post, which reminded me that I'd written this like 2 mos. ago and then COMPLETELY FORGOT ABOUT IT. You are the reason it went up! Yay you!

I'm glad you liked it, Shunsui's a hoot to write and I just adore Rangiku so she's a pleasure, as well. Thanks for reading!

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fairywine December 17 2005, 03:15:51 UTC
Of course Shunsui loves all the ladies.He's got a pimp hat,after all.But he is most devoted to his Nanao-chan~~~~.^__^

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hardlyfatal December 17 2005, 08:29:11 UTC
Pimp hat = loving the ladies. No hat, no love. Hee.

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yankeerose69 December 17 2005, 05:47:18 UTC
*falls in a fit of giggles* Stuff like this makes me love Shunsui and his lovely Nanao-chan so much. And Shunsui, well he's just a big old drunken hippy pervy dork. (and may I add, very hairy) So much I liked in this that I can't pinpoint everything so I'll just say cool beaners!!

Though I'm still dying for some smut with those two, I don't care if it has to be kinda sappy on the build up or just fucking from the get go, but something about wanting to read/see smut with them always gets me riled up but sadly, I have YET to see any written.

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hardlyfatal December 17 2005, 08:30:00 UTC
I've actually sort of gone off the Shunsui/Nanao pairing, I think she'd do better with Ukitake, but Shunsui's so freaking adorable.

Glad you liked it!

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yankeerose69 December 17 2005, 08:44:43 UTC
*scratches chin in thought* Hmmm....I never thought about that. That could be an interesting pairing indeed. I wouldn't mind seeing it work.

Shunsui: psst! If you happen to snag Nanao-chan before I do, let me watch.

Ukitake: *spazzes out in a coughing fit before passing out*

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hardlyfatal December 23 2005, 14:20:51 UTC
HAH.

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netbelleanie December 18 2005, 00:40:15 UTC
I love the line with the bartender, him taking away the booze XD

Nice fics ^_^

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hardlyfatal December 23 2005, 14:21:24 UTC
Thanks :)

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