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7snogs Tohru/Kyou, "jealousy"

Sep 23, 2005 08:48

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paynesgrey September 23 2005, 07:55:17 UTC

Awww! Cute! Tohru's reactions were really funny and unexpectd, but very normal responses. I like how you write Kyou. He's so endearing. ^^

hardlyfatal September 26 2005, 21:38:52 UTC

Thanks!

lunnera September 23 2005, 16:59:27 UTC

That was great. Especially the ending, you know Mayuko-sensei would be cool about stuff like that.

hardlyfatal September 26 2005, 21:39:08 UTC

I like her a lot, so, yeah :) Glad you liked it!

sakuyaslilbird September 24 2005, 00:04:20 UTC

I LOVE HOW YOU WRITE BOTH OF THEM! WRITE MORE! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time and almost cried when the fic was over :x i want more.

hardlyfatal September 26 2005, 21:39:17 UTC

Thanks so much!

readsalot September 28 2005, 08:23:29 UTC

Jealousy seems so un-Tohru, but you convinced me. And Kyou was so sweet, I can't stand it. Also, I love Mayu-sensei, so thanks for throwing her in.

hardlyfatal September 28 2005, 20:43:11 UTC

I'm so pleased you enjoyed it, thank you for reading!

clannadlvr October 12 2006, 03:23:45 UTC

“But if you’re done establishing ownership, can you come back to class sometime soon?”

*grins*

Absolutely adorable scene and completely believable for Tohru. It's always so interesting to watch her character experience things because it feels like we are also experiencing them for the first time.