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In His Head, a Tiny Dancer

Mar 12, 2008 22:31

Title: In His Head, a Tiny Dancer
Rated: G
Disclaimer: Not mine, but so pretty.
Word Count: 515

( Derek forgot--only for a moment--that she wasn't a person... )

derek/cameron, t:tscc

Comments 10

silentpheonix March 13 2008, 04:01:57 UTC

That was lovely.

It's such a compelling moment.

crazywriterchic March 13 2008, 04:18:48 UTC

Thank you. The scene in the show was compelling on its own. I always like to imagine what must be going through characters's heads during certain moments, and this is what I think was going through his. I'm working on 2 sequals. Maybe a third where he yells at her. Cuz...yelling can be hot.

nanewt011 March 13 2008, 05:54:38 UTC

I really like this, I am a total Derek/Cameron shipper 'cause it's so messed up. I can picture a scene where Cameron is dressing for prom and Sarah says something to her about sex and she says looking right at Derek, "I've had sex before." He then freaks out and shoots at her.

manicmarauder88 March 13 2008, 06:50:08 UTC

Hahaha that sounds rather hysterical. Someone needs to write that, stat.

crazywriterchic March 15 2008, 23:18:17 UTC

Bwahahaha! That would be too funny.

manicmarauder88 March 13 2008, 06:50:52 UTC

I love this! That's just about the best scene of the series, and I adore your take on it. Great job.

crazywriterchic March 15 2008, 23:14:07 UTC

Thank you so much!

bugchicklv March 14 2008, 00:07:23 UTC

*flail*

I love this, LOVE it. But, then again, when do I NOT love what you write?

crazywriterchic March 15 2008, 23:15:28 UTC

Aw! Thank you, that is so sweet.

I'm working on a sequal that turned into 2 parts--both short, but still.

tarmenel September 3 2008, 02:30:20 UTC

This was easily my favorite part of the first season. From the very moment Derek looked at Cameron and was like, OMG GTF AWAY FROM MEEEE RAWR SCARY SCARY ;- I was like, omg otp u_u What can I say? These kinds of relationships fascinate me.

THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL, (finally getting to the point) and I loved it. :D